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I have problems with word order.
Yesterday I saw a video about word order in English.The rule was: who, what ,where, when, how and why.
I try to write some sentences in different tenses following the rule.
I am going to go to school tomorrow by bus because it is obligatory.
I usually go swimming in the leisure center in the afternoon by bicycle because it is good for my health.
I have been watching English movies at my home every night to improve my listening skills.
I had eaten pizza before I got home last night because I was hungry.
I got married in Mexico two years ago by accident because I did not know the bride.
I am not sure these senteces are correct or not. I appreciate if someone could give me some advice. Thanks a lot.
I am not sure if the advice you were given is good. There is similar advice for journalists: ask who? what? where? when? how? and why? But they could ask these questions in any convenient order.
Very well written!
That is a good general rule, though occasionally it can be altered slightly to improve the flow, for example, your first sentence could have been 'Yesterday, I saw a video about word order in the English Language' in which case 'When' has been used first.
Saying that your other sentences work very well I have made a slight adjustment to a couple of them below which just improves the flow a little :)
I am going to go to school tomorrow by bus because it is obligatory.
I usually go swimming at the leisure center in the afternoon by bicycle because is good for my health.
I have been watching English movies at home every night to improve my listening skills.
I ate pizza before I got home last night because I was starving.
I accidentally got married in Mexico two years ago, I did not know the bride.
I hope this helps, if you'd like any further explanation let me know :)
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