Hello, I’m Mio. Nice to meet you. My birthday is May 26th, and I’m waiting for your presents! I come to school on foot every day. Maybe you know, it is a bit of tiring because Kobe University is located high altitude. I’m from Okayama, so now I live alone and I have to do everything by myself. At first, cooking seems to be very bothering, but it is more enjoyable than I expected. I want to brush up my cooking skills during college life. Eating is my favorite thing! I like both Japanese and Western style meal, but I especially love sweets like cakes, cookies and chocolate. Please invite me to go to your favorite café. I haven’t decided which clubs I will join. I’m interested in orchestra and mandolin because I like listening to and playing music so much. Then, remember that I’m very forgetful, so please tell me when I forget something important! Thank you for listening.
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Tomorrow, I'm going to introduce myself at English class. Please read below.Hello, I’m Mio. Nice to meet you. My birthday is May 26th, and I’m waiting for your presents! I come to school on foot every day. Which I am sure you know can be very tiring because of Kobe University's high altitude. I’m from Okayama, so now I live alone and I have to do everything by myself. At first, cooking seems to be a big bother, but it is more enjoyable than I expected. I want to brush up my cooking skills during college life. Eating is my favorite thing! I like both Japanese and Western style meal, but I especially love sweets like cakes, cookies and chocolate. Please invite me to go to your favorite café. I haven’t decided which clubs I will join but I’m interested in orchestra and mandolin because I like listening to and playing music so much. I’m very forgetful, so please remember to tell me when I forget something important! Thank you for listening.
Your introduction was very eloquent :) I just altered a few bits to make it flow a little more naturally without changing too many of your words.
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