Could you please give feedback for these short sentences? This might be a bullying issue.

On Friday during the class, A hit B's legs under the table. Also A hold her hands so firmly that it hurts a lot.

My interview script :) (Plz help me ASAP!!!!) Could you please help me with this interview script? Everyone in my company going to see this.. so it's really important for me :) 1. Would you like to introduce yourself? Hello everyone! I’m 0000. 0000 at 000 centre. I’ve been working here for one and a half year. Actually my first day started at 000 centre as a Class Assistant. That’s why 0000 centre fells like my home. At that time, I felt in love with children and I made my mind to work for children as a 00000. 2. What do you like most about your job? I think Children are adorable. Supporting them and their parents make are rewarding to me. 3. What is your favourite food or restaurant for lunch (Introduce us your 맛집hip place to eat around your centre!) I strongly recommend you to go to Hangbokhan Bapsang(행복한 밥상) in Lotte castle where is the place specialised in Bibimbap which is famous local dish in Korea. Bibimbab is served as a bowl of boiled rice topped with vegetables and gochujang (red pepper paste). You should stir together thoroughly before eating. You could find our colleagues at that restaurant! I strongly recommend you to try Yeolmu bibimbap which is Young Summer Radish Kimchi Bibimbap but it’s only available at summer :( 4. Coffee or tea? Coffee :) 5. Tell me something most people don’t know about you. When I was a little kid I lived in Reading, UK for a while. At that time I was impressed by kind local people and their education. That’s why I’m very interested in British early childhood education. (Is British early childhood education sounds weird?) 6. Could you tell us your big picture about 10 years later? Anything! I have a big dream. In ten years later, I want to travel all around the world and want to make a video like travel vlog(video log). Unfortunately I had two surgeries this year, while I was in a hospital, I couldn’t do anything but youtubing. Even Though I couldn’t go anywhere with my broken leg, I could get vicarious pleasure from watching travelling vlogs on Youtube. As I’m a big fan of travel, I really want to make video log and make people happy who could not travel everyday like me.

Could you please correct these sentences and make sure these are formal? ASAP plz ~ :) • 0000’s mum apologised for his behaviour and it’s her fault that he brought the packet of gum to the class. She’ll make sure that he’ll never bring his sweets in the future. • His mum said that Ju Won wouldn't mean to hurt Jxxx for a purpose. • She’ll make sure that 0000 will bring his own sticker book for the next class • Thank you for letting her know about what happened in the class.

Please help me with this feedback. ASAP!! After the open class for the last session, Ho yeon's mom and other parents already told us the complaints about the teacher. However, after giving the feedback, there wasn't any progress on 000's teaching style. For example, she sighed in front of the children and express negative facial expression in front of the parents. It's a pity that no parents could find out any feedback of progress from 00.

Q. Can you tell me about yourself? (interview answer) Could you check this answer? This is for my Flight attendant job interview answer. Please give me any feedback about the answer if there is something awkward. Q. Can you tell me about yourself? I am a positive and outgoing person. I have many experiences in the fields like office and service field. Specifically, I was promoted from temporary staff to full-time staff at the 00000 as a Customer Management Executive by proactive (or outgoing?) personality. Branch manager told me that one of the reason why I could promote to full time staff is that he watched that I helped 7 years-old child who was crying outside of the classroom to go inside of the classroom. I strongly believe that my personality will help me to be a great flight attendant for your company.

If you are hired, how do you think your major can contribute to you work as a flight attendant? Could I get feedback of interview script? Is this good answer? Since I majored in Business Administration, I had a lots of chance to experience team projects and multicultural environment. First of all, due to exceptional team working experience, I awarded silver prize at 34th Cheil worldwide idea festival which is the biggest advertising company in Korea. I was a team leader in group which was consist of 4 people, during 6 months journey for the competition. Secondly, I had a lots of experience to working in multinational environment. Since I really like to take the classes which was taught in English. Also, I had to do team projects with foreign students. This made me how to team working with people who are from other culture. Lastly, These experience made me to successfully relocated to Indonesia for an internship program which I had a chance to help business activities to local trading company with Indonesian students in one team. These team working experience with multinational environment will make contribution as an flight attendant in Qatar airways.

Could you make this to look more professional? Hello, I would like to share feedback about 000 During year 2017 as a manager she held regular performance and development conversation such as how to improve PT conversion rate. It helped us to improve our sales. She supported me to solve problems easily so that I could find solution easily. For team development, daily briefing really helped me to make positive atmosphere for working on a daily basis. As a newbie, training such as how to handle complaint and phone monitoring helped me a lot for working more professionally.