Could you please give feedback for these short sentences?
This might be a bullying issue.
On Friday during the class, A hit B's legs under the table. Also A hold her hands so firmly that it hurts a lot.
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Could you please give feedback for these short sentences?
This might be a bullying issue.On Friday during the class, A hit B's legs under the table. Also A held [perhaps 'gripped' or 'squeezed'?] her ["B's" ?] hands so firmly [perhaps 'tightly'?] that it hurt a lot.
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