Is there any thing to correct? please help me :)
Is there any thing to correct about grammar mistakes or unnatural expressions?
Feel free to correct it :)
Thank you in advance!
<Sales>
1. Maintain re-registration rate
- CR rate management: as low as possible
2. Refund management
- write refund reason specifically
<Service>
1. Greet customers actively
- Stand up to greet customers
- try to eye contact with customers for intimacy
- update feedback file as specific as possible
<Project>
- To be meticulous workshop coordinator
- Parents workshop follow-up
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Is there any thing to correct? please help me :)
Is there any thing to correct about grammar mistakes or unnatural expressions?Are there any grammer mistakes or unnatural expression to correct?
Feel free to correct it :)
Thank you in advance!
1. Maintain a re-registration rate
- CR rate management: Keep as low as possible.
2. Refund management
- write refund reason specifically.
Write the reason for refund in specific detail.
1. Greet customers actively Activiely greet customers.
- Stand up to greet the customers
- Try to make eye contact with customers for intimatacy to appear more friendly. (intimatacy tends to means lovers)
- update feedback file as specific as possible.
- To be a meticulous workshop coordinator
- Attend parents workshop follow-up.
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