My first essay

My first essay i would like to speak about today's. Today I woke up at eight o'clock. I had two apples and a glass of milk for breakfast. I went to living room and ate them.

Hello there! Those in the first sentence refer to the footstep of the survivor... :)

Hello there! It is the rule of conditional sentences. In conditional sentence type 2, instead of using "was" after "I", we use "were". Hopefully it helps! :)

Hello there! Maybe this one works? If you love who you are now, you stop yourself from growing bigger. Hopefully it helps... :)

Hello, Kazu! Do you mind if I give several feedback?

Three cats followed me yesterday.

Yesterday, I went back to my home on foot because it was snowing.
(usually I went to univ. by bicycles)

When I almost arrived to my house, I walked aside to avoid two cats.
Then the cats followed me.
If I stopped, they also stopped.
If I started walking, they also started walking. lol

And I walked for a while, there was another cat.
Apparently, the cat was a friend of the two cats.

Finally, I was followed by the three cats:))))))))))))) lol
They were very cute!
I had weird, interesting and sweet time, thanks for the cats.

Hopefully it help,,, :)

January 25

At the morning free play time, they were playing with blocks and some dolls. Some boys teased Boy M because I guess they seemed to get bored playing with the toys. There were quite a lot of children on the carpet. It was crowded and loud there. During cleaning time, some of the children were still playing around at a carpeted area. Even though I encouraged them to pick toys up on floor and put them away ; like praising the children who were doing it and handed the toys,they didn't listen and get more naughtier and goofy around. Miss. Anna started to say, “ I see Boy K cleaning up!” The children realized what she said and they started to pick the toys up. She kept saying that. Surprisingly, that really worked more than she thought. Everybody in the classroom joined to pick them up at the end. That made me realize that I was always saying the same thing to them. So that's why they are not interested to listen to me.

Since yesterday, Boy M gave the teacher a hard time because he refused to eat his lunch. The teachers said that he was very picky. We encouraged him to take a bite. However, he didn't take any bites and go to sleep. At snack time, there was his lunch instead of his snack at his table. Because the teacher wanted him to ask the teachers to have fruit or yogurt. M has difficulty with speaking English. That caused a problem to socialize with his friends. Therefore, the teachers pushed him little hard. When he sat on the table and played his lunch box, the teacher tried to make him talk and showed his snack, “ Do you want fruit or yogurt?” M pointed to yogurt. “ Yogurt, please!” the teacher really encouraged him to talk with her patience. Finally, he said that yogurt after ten minutes conversation. I saw her effort and teaching is always little step by little step. I also realized that M was coughing and got runny nose these days. He was also sometime spacey during play time. I assumed that he was getting sick and it might bother his appetite.

Conversation review: Jan 30, 2016

1. Kotatsu is a type of tables in Japan. It has a heater on the back side of its board, and its side is covered with a blanket. It's very helpful to warm your body  instantly in a cold room. They say it's too comfortable to stand up and leave.

2. I take a subway to work. Even though there are many bus stops near my house, I don't want to use any buses to commute. They are always delayed due to traffic jams, snowing and slippery roads in the winter.

3. I don't like cold weather. So sometimes I dream of moving wish to move to Okinawa, the most southern area of Japan. I'm surprised that the current temperature in Okinawa is 20 degrees higher than here. It looks as if Okinawa are located in another country.