Conversation review: Jan 30, 2016

1. Kotatsu is a type  (Using the word "type" sounds more natural) of tables in Japan. It has a heater on the back side of under its board, and its side is covered with a blanket. It's very helpful to instantly (it depends on the context and emphasis of the word "instantly". It sounds more natural when you say it before the verb, because it is an adverb. Thus it sounds more natural) the warm your body instantly in a cold room. They say it's gets too comfortable to stand up and leave.

2. I take a subway to work. Even though there are many bus stops near my house, I don't want to use any buses to commute. They are always delayed due to traffic jams.  During the winter the roads are snowy and slippery.  (Your point is more clear when you make it into a sentence rather then putting it all together. ) snowing and slippery roads in the winter.

3. I don't like cold weather. So sometimes I dream of moving into Okinawa, the southernmost area of Japan. I'm surprised that the current temperature in Okinawa is 20 degrees higher than here. It looks as if Okinawa is  (The word "were" is used for third person point of view. You used the word "looks" so the sentence should agree with eachother by using a present be-verb) located in another country.

I hope this was helpful. :)

Conversation review: Jan 30, 2016