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La casa en el campo
La casa estaba en el campo. Estaba detrás de los arboles sobre la colina, era un area sola y silenciosa. No animales vivian cerca de la casa y nadie vivio en la casa vieja desde hace mucho tiempo. Un día yo estuve pasando por la vieja casa en el campo. <em></em> Era un atajo a mi casa pero me no gustaba ir por ese camino y en ese día especial era una mala idea...
Please feel free to correct as any feedback would be very much appreciated
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Hello, uhm, if you read it you'll notice a part is missing
it's this part
"Yo tenia que andar sobre la camina que paso la vieja casa donde mi escuela."
Could you write what you meant to say in english? I'll translate it to spanish afterwards for you,in a way that's more clear to understand.
0 votedJanuary 23, 20161konnichiwa takako-san,
I just begun learning jappanese, I hope my reply can help you.
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1) Hello, there! Hello there!
2)Hello! My name is Takako. (It's unecessary to repeat hello twice)
3)I'm from Japan.
4)I live in Hokkaido, the northern part of Japan.
5) I have 2 daughters, and now I am working for them. ("working for them" これは ちょとう。。 まぎらわしいです。 "Working for their sake" sounds better. When you work for a person, they are your boss. )6)I've been interested in learning foreign languages since my childhood, and I speak English and Russian, just a little, though... ("my" is unecessary. でも。。わるいじゃないです。<em>"and"</em>もです。 "just a litle though..." the "," should not be there. ) ("Just a litle though...")
7) I want to improve especially English, because I want to teach English to children in my town.
I hope to be a professional teacher...It's (I want to improve <em>（my）English specially/（ｍｙ）English in special,</em>)
I am looking forward to communicate with people from different countries, here in itaki. ("communicating")
Thank you for reading my notebook! (いええ、たかこさんのノートすてきな です。わたしのにほんごわるいで。ごめんなさい.)0 votedJanuary 22, 20160
