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Hello, there!
Hello! My name is Takako.
I'm from Japan.
I live in Hokkaido, the northern part of Japan.
I have 2 daughters, and now I am working for them.
I've been interested in learning foreign languages since my childhood, and I speak English and Russian, just a little, though...
I want to improve my English especially, because I want to teach English to children in my town.
I hope to be a professional teacher...
I am looking forward to communicating with people from different countries, here on itaki.
Thank you for reading my notebook!
konnichiwa takako-san,
I just begun learning jappanese, I hope my reply can help you.
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1) Hello, there! Hello there!
2)Hello! My name is Takako. (It's unecessary to repeat hello twice)
3)I'm from Japan.
4)I live in Hokkaido, the northern part of Japan.
5) I have 2 daughters, and now I am working for them. ("working for them" これは ちょとう。。 まぎらわしいです。 "Working for their sake" sounds better. When you work for a person, they are your boss. )
6)I've been interested in learning foreign languages since my childhood, and I speak English and Russian, just a little, though... ("my" is unecessary. でも。。わるいじゃないです。"and"もです。 "just a litle though..." the "," should not be there. ) ("Just a litle though...")
7) I want to improve especially English, because I want to teach English to children in my town.
I hope to be a professional teacher...It's (I want to improve (my)English specially/(my)English in special,)
I am looking forward to communicate with people from different countries, here in itaki. ("communicating")
Thank you for reading my notebook! (いええ、たかこさんのノートすてきな です。わたしのにほんごわるいで。ごめんなさい.)
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