My first accident

The last 9 of april This past April 9th, I was heading to the school where I was designated suggested to vote for the presidential elections. I was walking with a little bit rushed hurried, and when suddenly a cat crossed (or "passed") in front of me. (se cruzó delante de mí)appear in/ went through(se cruzó, se me atravesó ) my way (very close to me) I lost the my balance and while as I fell to the ground ,the cat run away . As a result, my knee got hurt and began to bleed. Some people helped to me by using oxygenated water to clean the injure injury and also by placing adhesive bandages on the wound. plasters in the damaged zone. I spent twenty minutes feeling the pain in my knee. I was so thankful with for those persons people that treated me so good well. every time. After that , I entered to the school to accomplish fulfill my obligation as a citizen.

Espero que sientas mejor. quisiera saber si usted necesita más ayuda con Inglés

Shopping day

When my alarm went off, and I woke up too quickly and I fell over off the bed.
After breakfast, I got a hold on of my friend María because we wanted to go in to the shopping center. We ate in a Italian restaurant and later go on the then went shopping because we grew up and we need for new clothes and shoes because we have grow up.

"I got a hold of someone" is an idiom that means to contact someone. I hope my corrections help.

Good men are no longer exist.

I can't believe men with good intentions do not exist these days. They are always
treat you badly, even when you don't give them the a reason or do not take a no like an their answer. Maybe I can say that few girls have are lucky to have a good partner that who can be loyal, loving, and respectful.
Not all the men are the same but also, not all the girls (or "women") are the same. or accept all the bad words.

Stay strong, keep faith, have hope and share love! Keep up the good work Lizzie!

I need some help with a report. Can anyone see look at it?

Hi! In spite of Despite the fact that I had have been working hard in on my writing, I continue to make follow in making mistakes. Can anyone check this?
(I can help you with spanish in exchange.)


The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.


The pie charts depict information about the percentage of online shopping sales for retail sector in Canada in the years 2005 and 2010. They give figures for online sales in electronics……

According to the graphs, during 2005 the biggest proportion of online expenditure was on in the electronic and appliance sectors, which comprised of 35% of the total amount purchased within the year, whereas the same item was the second greatest expenditure five years later. Also, there was another decrease in sales in home furnishing in 2010 (they dropped from 25% to 15%).

Most of the people in 2005, who had expended spent money on in food and beverage and video games, made up 22 % and 18%, respectively. In contrast, in 2010 the majority of people purchased food and beverages, reaching a high of 32 % of the sales (The most popular expenditure of the year online indeed). It was followed by electronic and appliance, video games and home furnishing.

Overall, we can see that the statistics show that in the gap a span of five years, time the online consumes consumption in the retail sector had been changed considerably.


THANKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Impressive writing Cecilia! Keep up the great work and don't hesitate to ask me any questions.