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New essay! Hello! I'm trying to improve my writing skills and get a formal use of English in my essays. I,ve written a new one, if someone could check it and transform it into a formal essay would be great. MODERN TECHNOLOGY IS CHANGING OUR WORLD. THIS HAS ADVANTAGES SUCH AS BRINGING PEOPLE TOGETHER THROUGH COMMUNICATION. IT ALSO HAS DISADVANTAGES SUCH AS DESTROYING THE DIFFERENCES BETWEEN CULTURES. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE? Everyone know, that technology, in particular the Internet, has changed the way we used to live. Nowadays, we are living in a digital revolution where modern technology is everywhere. It affects the ways in which we work with and we interact with other members of the society. This essay will discuss some of the benefits that technology, in this case Internet, has brought to our world, and then I will look briefly at the disadvantages. If we look backwards, we can see some improvements that Internet has brought to our lives. Firstly, the major benefit that we can find is unlimited communication. Everyone who live abroad can speak face to face with someone via Skype or any social media. In addition, there are multiples websites where you can share your opinions, ideas and thoughts with other people around the globe. Secondly, there is abundant information and resources, for instance, it is now common for people to seek advices on all sort of issues, but you must be cautios, because not everything you read could it be true. Another key point is the entertainment that Internet offers. This is the major reason why people enjoy surfing the Internet. There are plenty of webs where you can watch movies, download music or read your favourite books. The last point is the online services and e-commerce, which make easier for some companies to transfer funds to every part of the world. Nonetheless, there are few disadvantages as well. One negative point is that Internet can cause addition. This big issue affects people social interactions and sometimes incrementing problems with member of the family. Equally important are healthy problems due to spend much time at the PC, such as obesity. To sum up, I am in complete agreement that modern technology has brought to our lives more benefits than disadvantages. Now is easier keep closer to someone you love, no matter how far you are from them. THANK YOU FOR READING MY BORING ESSAY!!

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Nonetheless, there are a few disadvantages as well. One negative point is that the Internet can cause addiction. This big issue affects people's social interactions and sometimes incrementing creates problems with members of the family. Equally important are healthy problems due to spend much time at the PC, such as obesity. Health problems, such as obesity, which are caused by spending too much time on the computer, are equally important disadvantages of the Internet.

To sum up, I am in complete agreement that modern technology has brought to our lives more benefits than disadvantages to our lives. Now, it is easier to keep closer to someone you love, no matter how far you are from them.


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New essay!

Hello! I'm trying to improve my writing skills and get a formal use of English in my essays.

I've written a new one, if someone could check it and transform it into a formal essay would be great.

MODERN TECHNOLOGY IS CHANGING OUR WORLD. THIS HAS ADVANTAGES SUCH AS BRINGING PEOPLE TOGETHER THROUGH COMMUNICATION. IT ALSO HAS DISADVANTAGES SUCH AS DESTROYING THE DIFFERENCES BETWEEN CULTURES. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

Everyone knows that technology, in particular the Internet, has changed the way we used to live. Nowadays, we are living in a digital revolution where modern technology is everywhere. It affects the ways in which we work with and we interact with other members of the society. This essay will discuss some of the benefits that technology, in this case the Internet, has brought to our world, and then I will look briefly at the disadvantages.

If we look backwards, we can see some improvements that the Internet has brought to our lives. Firstly, the major benefit that we can find is unlimited communication. Everyone who lives abroad can speak face to face with someone via Skype or other social media. In addition, there are multiples many websites where you can share your opinions, ideas and thoughts with other people around the globe. Secondly, there is abundant information and resources; for instance, it is now common for people to seek advices on all sort of issues, but you must be cautious, because not everything you read could it be is true. Another key point is the entertainment that the Internet offers. This is the major reason why people enjoy surfing the Internet. There are plenty of websites where you can watch movies, download music or read your favourite books. The last point is the Lastly, online services and e-commerce, which make it easier for some companies to transfer funds to any part of the world.

Nonetheless, there are a few disadvantages as well. One negative point is that the Internet can cause addiction. This big issue affects people's social interactions and sometimes incrementing creates problems with other members of the family. Equally important are healthy problems such as obesity, due to spending much time at the PC computer, such as obesity.

To sum up, I am in complete agreement that modern technology has brought to our lives more benefits than disadvantages. Now It is now easier keep closer to to keep in touch with someone you love, no matter how far [away] you are from them.

THANK YOU FOR READING MY BORING ESSAY!!

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MODERN TECHNOLOGY IS CHANGING OUR WORLD. THIS HAS THERE ARE ADVANTAGES, SUCH AS BRINGING PEOPLE TOGETHER THROUGH COMMUNICATION. IT ALSO HAS THERE ARE ALSO DISADVANTAGES, SUCH AS DESTROYING THE DIFFERENCES BETWEEN CULTURES (not aure what you mean by "destroying the diffwrenches between cultures"). TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?


Everyone knows that technology, in particular the Internet, has changed the way we used to live. Nowadays, we are living in a digital revolution where modern technology is everywhere. It affects the ways in which we work with and we interact with other members of the society. This essay will discuss some of the benefits that technology, in this case in regards to the Internet, has brought to our world, and then I will briefly look briefly at the disadvantages.

If we look backwards in the past, we can see some improvements that the Internet has brought to our lives. Firstly, the major benefit that we can find is unlimited communication. Everyone who lives abroad can speak face to face with someone via Skype or any other social media platforms. In addition, there are multiples websites where you can share your opinions, ideas and thoughts with other people from around the globe. Secondly, there is an abundant amount of information and resources. For instance, it is now common for people to seek advices on all sort of issues, but you must be cautious, because not everything you read could it be  is true. Another key point benefit the Internet offers is the entertainment that Internet offers. This is the major reason why people enjoy surfing the Internet. There are plenty of websits where you can watch movies, download music or read your favourite books. The One last benefit the Internet provides is the online services and e-commerce, which make it easier for some companies to transfer funds to every any part of the world.

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There are also a few disadvantages of using and having access to the Internet as well. One negative aspect, is that the Internet can cause addiction. This big issue affects peoples' social interactions and sometimes results in problems with family members. Equally important are health problems due to spending too much time at the PC, such as obesity. In conclusion, I am in complete agreement that modern technology has brought more benefits than disadvantages to our lives. It is easier now to keep in touch and interact with someone you love, no matter how far you are from them. Thats all I could do. Hope it helps. It was a good essay :)
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It is common knowledge that technology, in particular the Internet, has changed the way we used to live. Nowadays, we are living in a digital revolution, where modern technology is incorporated into every aspect of our lives. It affects the ways in which we work and we interact with, other members of the society. This essay will discuss some of the benefits that technology, specifically the Internet, has brought to our world; and then I will look briefly at the disadvantages of the Internet. In the past we can see some improvements which Internet has brought to our lives. Firstly, the major benefit that we can find is unlimited communication. Everyone who lives abroad can speak face-to-face with someone via Skype or any social media platform. In addition, there are multiples websites, where you can share your opinions, ideas and thoughts with other people around the globe. Secondly, there is an abundant source of information and resources on the Internet. For instance, it is now common for people to seek advice on all sort of issues, but you need to be cautious, because not everything you read could it be true. Another key point useful benefit is the entertainment that the Internet offers. This is one of the major reasons why people enjoy surfing the Internet. There are plenty of websites where you can watch movies, download music or read your favourite books. The fourth benefit I will highlight is online services and e-commerce, which makes it easier for some companies to offer products and services to every part of the world.

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