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    Hi Ezzat,

    Please find some suggestions below.

    Sean :)

    Money From My Perspective

    Money may outperform other factors in helping us to achieve happiness, this is true, but <s>it equals to </s>these other factors <s>in order to</s> are also needed in order to guarantee happiness. <s>, and that is also true.</s>

    1-Is it well written ?
    2- Does it make sense?
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    January 10, 2020
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    My favourite snack bar

    Have you ever felt as if you were at home while you were sitting in a snack bar? <s>Here you will find where that happens, so keep up reading.</s> Keep reading if you want to find out where that is possible.

    There are many good restaurants, cafés or snack bars in town that are quite good. Most of them are located in the city center, close to the cathedral. But there is one that may have never grabbed your attention. It is located at Church Street, just in front of the Library. It is called “The Lost World”. Its name <s>yet</s> sounds pretty good, doesn’t it?

    That bar seems very small from the outside but when you walk in you will discover a large snack bar with a<s>n</s> outdoor<s>s</s> area - very useful when it gets hot. This area has two fountains and is surrounded by a large number of plants. All this helps to maintain a comfortable temperature in the summer. The interior is original and cheerful with comfy chairs and <s>it’s</s> its overall style is somewhere between modern and <s>hippie</s> hippy. <s>In addition </s>Additionally, it smells so good thanks to <s>incense</s> burning incense.

    When it comes to food, you will be able to have some drinks and snacks which are delicious and tasty <s>with</s> <s>a </s>while at the same time costing a reasonable price. The snacks are made with fresh <s>food</s> ingredients and you will never find convenience food. Also, there is <s>such</s> a <s>big</s> wide variety of vegetarian food<s>. On the other hand,</s> <s>and</s> the service is always <s>smiling</s> friendly and <s>very</s> informative.

    I highly recommend visiting this welcoming, cozy and wonderful place. No doubt you will want to come back again and again. See you there!
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    January 6, 2020
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    Hi Giselle,

    "My Virtual Friends

    Lots of people use Instagram as a place to merely see some beautiful or outstanding people. It’s <s>more</s> like a star-chasing place where most people don’t seem quite real. And, if that’s the only thing I can find <s>here</s>there, I don’t think I’ll use it one more second! I’m active on IG not because of the aforementioned but because I know my friends are there<s>. </s>and, I know they<s>’re</s> not only truly care about me but also <s>and</s> want to grow together with me. I’ll only stop using IG when all these people who mean a lot to me are no longer <s>existent</s> use Instagram. I don’t care about fans, but I do care a lot about my friends. I’m here because my friends are here, too."

    I hope you found the suggestions helpful.

    Sean :)
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    January 2, 2020
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  • Answered
    Hi Tiger, Without going into any complex details, both are fine and would work okay in this context, e.g. I could say "I get scared easily when I watch horror films" or "I scare easily when I watch horror films" although the first would sound more natural. Hope that helps, Sean :)
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    January 1, 2020
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    Hi Dara,

    I hope you find some of the suggestions helpful.

    Best wishes,

    Sean :)

    Hello! Could you help me with editing, please? And Happy New Year!

    (*Happy New Year in Japanese*)
    Masha, I don’t know<s>,</s> what it is in Japanese, but you definitely know! ☺👍❄🎄
    And you should always know<s>,</s> that you can rely on yourself<s>,</s> because you’re a strong and very talented person. 💪💐👩‍🎨

    I wish you a lot of happiness, fun and smiles. Let your friends and family always be there for you. That’s a very important thing — we both know it! 😉
    And I wish <s>you to</s> all your dreams come true in 2020. Believe in miracles and one day you will open an envelope with a letter from Hogwarts!

    Happy New Year!
    Wesołych Świąt i Szczęśliwego Nowego Roku! (**that's in Polish**)
    💜🎄❄🎄❄🎄❄💜
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    January 1, 2020
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    Hi Maria,

    I hope you find some of the following suggestions helpful.

    Best wishes,

    Sean :)



    Healthy lifestyle

    This essay will examine how diet, occupation and free-time activities influence our health. It will consider that healthy eating, reducing our stress levels at work, and physical activities can considerably improve our well-being.
    First, <s>of all</s>, <s>needless to say that</s> the food we eat plays a crucial role in keeping healthy. In fact, if our body doesn't receive enough vitamins and minerals, we can experience malaise, irritability and fatigue, which can lead to more serious health problems in the future. For that reason it's advisable to eat fruit and vegetables and reduce fat and sugar consumption.
    <s>Besides</s>Second, we also shouldn't underestimate the importance of regular exercise. Scientists have proven that people who who like being out in the wild<s>s</s>, trekking, and jogging demonstrate better health than <s>the ones</s> those who have a sedentary lifestyle. Further, according to these studies, people who enjoy indoor hobbies are more prone to obesity. Because of these points, my <s>impression</s> view is that everyone should try to change their daily routine in order to find time to do sport<s>s</s> on a regular basis.
    When it comes to work, I would like to highlight that we need to take into consideration not only a lack of movement in modern offices, but also stress levels. It is common knowledge that stress can boost our productivity, but being constantly under pressure can lead to negative consequences in the long-term. From my point of view, it is important to reduce such long-term stress levels. Not only <s>can</s> will it be beneficial for our mental health, but it <s>can</s> will also help us to increase enjoyment in our job and improve relationships with our colleagues.
    To sum up, there are three aspects of a healthy lifestyle: diet, physical activities, and low stress environment. In my opinion, it is better to prevent diseases than to cure them so we need to make more efforts to implement healthy habits into our life.
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    January 1, 2020
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  • Answered
    Hi Emarbe, I think they all make sense, depending on the context. Here are some additional suggestions also. Best wishes, Sean :) --Move back to earlier pages - Move on to later pages OR move to a further page OR move forward to page (number) --Stop messing around OR Stop messing about Stop fidgeting around/about. --Read for depth. There is an echo effect . ---Leave the question (out) for later.
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    December 31, 2019
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    Hi Fernando,

    I hope you find some of these suggestions helpful.

    Best wishes,

    Sean :)



    Crying over spilled oil

    I've walked the Brazilian Northeast beaches for three weeks now and I still can not come to a conclusion about this disaster. It has been relatively easy to follow southwards the wake left by this oil slick and observe its effects on sand and sea creatures. However, backtracking all the way to the slick's origin has been highly complicated and although American satelites were used to do so <s>for that but found no trace</s> they have been unable to locate the source. The oil slick seems to trick satelites.

    Based on photos made available by Europeans, researchers at the University of Bahia saw what could be a 22-square-kilometer new oil slick off the Bahia coast <s> This possibility</s> but this was eventually <s>was</s> ruled out when Brazilian agency IBAMA flew over the region and could not spot it. It suggested that the researchers had been mistaken, as there were some clouds over the area that hindered visibility. The technique used to measure the slick is based on water rugosity/roughness. The supposedly problematic region was smooth and even. The oil was thought to hava spread all over the surface.

    By claiming not to have been able to track the slick, Americans indirectly confirm the idea that oil, heavier than water, sinks and flows along a lower level.


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    December 31, 2019
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    I'm not sure what "Yayeye" is but perhaps you mean "You've" which is a contraction of "You have" which in this sentence is being used to mean something like "you must catch them all", "you need to catch them all" or "you have to catch them all", e.g. I've heard this phrase in Pokemon, meaning you have to catch all the Pokemon. I hope that helps. Sean :)
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    December 30, 2019
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    12/30

    I’ve cleaned my room.
    In Japan, people clean their house to welcome in the new year.
    This is called “o-souji”.
    I’m not good at cleaning, so I didn’t want to do o-souji.
    However, my room was messy, so I had to do I-souji.

    Please correct my sentences if they’re incorrect😄
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    December 30, 2019
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