Money From My Perspective
Money may (outperform) other factors in order to (achieve) happiness , this is true, but it (equals) to these factors in order to (guarantee) happiness, and that is also true.
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Hi Ezzat,
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Money From My Perspective
Money may outperform other factors in helping us to achieve happiness, this is true, but it equals to these other factors in order to are also needed in order to guarantee happiness. , and that is also true.
1-Is it well written ?
2- Does it make sense?
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