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Hello everyone! My name is Kira and I'm a second year in college. ハワイで生まれて、育ちました。でも、今大学のためにオレゴンに住んでいます。趣味はバレーボールをすることと、音楽を聞くことです。来年日本に留学するつもりだから、行く前に一生懸命日本語を勉強するべきと思った。私は日本語の会話をしたいですけど、英語でも会話をすることができる。手伝ってくれてありがとう!
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    First Day!

    Today I started (using) italki.
    I wonder how many days I can keep on writing on this notebook...
    Someone who studies English, let's keep on studying together;)

     

    italkiよこうそ!英語頑張って!

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    January 9, 2016
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    A friend of mine and Japan

    When a friend of mine, David, came to Japan for the first time, he unwittingly commited a myriad of cultural faux pas and inconvenienced people. Also, since he had't read up on Japanese culture prior to his departure, it took him several months to acclimatise to this country. However, after experiencing loads of cultural snafus, he finally got accustomed to the Japanese lifestyle.

     

    だいたい完璧!

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    January 9, 2016
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    Today's spending (this sounds more like spending money, rather than spending time. maybe "How I spent Today" or "What I Did Today" is more appropriate 


    Today, I spent time to study TOEIC TEST. (Today I spent time studying for the TOEIC test)

    It is difficult for me to study English. good :)

    But I have to make an effort. good :)

    I want to get a high score on the next TOEIC TEST.

     

    TOEIC頑張って!

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    January 9, 2016
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    I'm so tired. good 

    My school started today. good
    I had English and science. good
    So clean in school. (the school is so clean [?])

    It's very cold. good
    The cold gave me goosebumps. good
    But can turn my all homework to my teacher. (but of course I turned in all my homework to my teacher [?])

    Of course.

    I was on day duty today. good
    I say "yoroshikuonegaishimasu".Just then everyone of in my class follows to me (and repeats by saying) "yoroshikuonegaishimasu"
    I'm so tired... good
    I will get enough sleep. [日本語でなんと言いたい?]


    I think it's good! :D

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    January 7, 2016
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    Recommendation, Advice, Warning, Order, Instruction

    You might want to cut your hair.. good :)
    You might not want to accept his propose. proposal
    You could choose the blue jacket but in the gold colored.

    You should try a spaghetti with salted cod roe sauce in Japan.
    You shouldn’t make noise when you eat spaghetti. good :)
    You ought to know that the car you can see in the rear-view mirror is an undercover police car.
    I recommend giving chip tip when the nakai-san (waitress) came comes to your room for the first time in ryokan (Japanese style hotel).
    Why don’t you go to the bathroom before going to bed?
    It’s a good idea to add apple and honey to when you make (Japanese) curry.

    You had better keep inside of the yellow line at the station. good :)
    You had better not show your snacks or drinks in front of monkeys. good :)

    You have until monday monring to finish the job until Monday morning.
    You need to give me some bucks to pass this gate. (correct, but not natural sounding way of using "bucks")
    You can’t use loud speakers in the library. good :)

    You must pay tax. good :)
    You must not use your phone while driving. good! :D


    よくできましたよ!

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    January 7, 2016
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    Big cleaning

    it was the first working day in 2016.

    U know?
    In Japan, before new year's, we do 'Oo-souji'.
    To translate in English, it is "a big cleaning".
    We clean our house everywhere and it would gives you a feeling which that you are cleaning not only the house but also your hart.
    Then, you become ready to welcome a/the new year.
    It's interesting, isn't it? (それな!笑)
    My workplace follows the Japanese tradition, so we did Oo-souji yesterday.
    We wanted to do that before new year's, but we were busy.

    Anyway, we cleaned our restaurant, cleared our minds made clean mind, and can how then we'll enjoy working in 2016!

     

    あけましておめでとうございます!この日記はよく書きました。少しだけ、私は日記を変わりました。もっとナチュラルになるためです。やっぱりお掃除はいいね。私の家族も家を掃除しました。ちょっとめどくさいと思いますけど、掃除した後でいい気持ちがもらえます。これからも英語頑張ってね!

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    January 6, 2016
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    Please correct the sentences! 私は英語に翻訳してみた。

    2015年12月29日火曜日。

    遂に人生の目的が決まった。I have just chosen/decided my life purpose. 

    それは「世界に独創的なライフスタイルを提案する」である。That is "I will suggest original lifestyles to the world."

    多忙な現代社会で休日こそがライフスタイルの中心である。In the busy modern society, a holiday is in the center of a lifestyle. 

    そこをどの様に充実させるかが重要なのだ。There it is important whether you are able to expand it. 

    今後、私はこの目的を軸に行動していく。 In the future, I will act for this purpose.

    Tuesday, December, 15th, 2015. I be settled purpose of life at last. That is [I proposal original life style in world]. Holiday is core of life style in the busy present age society. It is important how like to enhance. From now on, I will action this purpose axis.

     

    私は全部日本語の文章が知らなかったけど、英語に翻訳することを頑張りました。複雑なトピックから、この日記はいいと思うんです。でも、英語は少しだけ辞書からの言葉らしい。目的は素晴らしいですから、これからも頑張ってください ^^

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    January 6, 2016
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    Write about my home town

    I live in Osaka. I was born and bred (and raised) in Osaka.

    It's a comfortable town and there are many delicious foods.
    For example, There are Takoyaki, Kushi-katsu, Okonomiyaki and so on.
    Osaka is said to be the kichen of the country(天下の台所).

    The people who live in Osaka are interesting and bright.
    There is also Osaka dialect(大阪弁). This shows that the word (way 喋る方法) that Osaka people speak is a little unique  

    Please come visit to Osaka. Thank you.

     

    この日記はいいと思います。意味は全部正しいですが、もっとナチュラルになるために、少しだけ変わりました。"and bred"はちょっと変のような気がするから、"and raised"と変化しました。これからも英語頑張って!

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    January 6, 2016
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    風邪をひいたかも

    I seem to have caught a cold because my throat is painful (sore/in pain/hurts) and I have a cough.So before I go to bed, I will take some medicines. I wish (hope) I will be fine tommorrow.

     

    全部意味がわかりましたけど、もっとナチュラルになるために少しだけ言葉を変わりました。英語頑張ってね。そして、お大事に〜

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    January 6, 2016
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