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Write about my home town
I live in Osaka. I was born and bred (and raised) in Osaka.
It's a comfortable town and there are many delicious foods.
For example, There are Takoyaki, Kushi-katsu, Okonomiyaki and so on.
Osaka is said to be the kichen of the country(天下の台所).
The people who live in Osaka are interesting and bright.
There is also Osaka dialect(大阪弁). This shows that the word (way 喋る方法) that Osaka people speak is a little unique
Please come visit to Osaka. Thank you.
この日記はいいと思います。意味は全部正しいですが、もっとナチュラルになるために、少しだけ変わりました。"and bred"はちょっと変のような気がするから、"and raised"と変化しました。これからも英語頑張って!
Write about my home town
I live in Osaka. I was born and bred in Osaka.
It's a wonderful/quiet/ peacefulcomfortable town, and there are many delicious types of foods.
For example, there are Takoyaki, Kushi-katsu, Okonomiyaki and so on.
Osaka is said to be the kichen of the country.(天下の台所).
The people who live in Osaka are interesting and bright.
There is also an Osaka dialect(大阪弁). This shows that the way word that Osaka citizens people speak is a little unique a little.
Please come and visit to Osaka. Thank you.
Write about my hometown home town
I live in Osaka. I was born and bred in Osaka.
It's a comfortable town. And there are many delicious foods.
For example, there are Takoyaki, Kushi-katsu, Okonomiyaki and so much more on. ["so on" is okay, but I'd use it more for speaking.]
Osaka is said to be the kitchen of the country(天下の台所). [oh really? I didnt know! :D]
The people who live in Osaka are interesting and bright. [bright can also mean "smart," so maybe "cheery" would be better^^]
There is also the Osaka dialect(大阪弁). This shows that the way the word that Osaka people speak [OR the words that people from Osaka use] is a little unique.
Please come visit to Osaka. Thank you.
I've actually passed through Osaka on the way to Kobe. I'll have to explore Osaka sometime, the food sounds amazing! Thank you for sharing :D
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