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English homework (please help me correct the composition)
A few years ago,I still remember that day is rain,I still remember that rainy day a few years ago.
I forgot bring my umbrella,and she Immediately put everything down,and then riding a motorcycle in the heavy rain to pick me up,I forgot to bring my umbrella. She immediately dropped everything and rode a motorcycle in the heavy rain to pick me up.
I feel felt so blessed at that moment.
Who is she? she is my mother!!
The rest does not make much sense in English:
Never to
complain with everything,always for us to pay .??
If you do not have her,I really don't know how to
be good.Do you maybe mean:
I would not know what to do without her?
0 votedMarch 14, 20180Self-introduction
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Good morning,my dear professors. My name is M**,24 years old,from Y** City, L** Province .I am very glad to be here for this interview.
My undergraduate period was accomplished at D** University in 2016. And My major was Environmental Engineering. During those four years of education, I worked diligently at my major. I have built up a solid foundation of professional knowledge and improved my skills of Experimental operation comprehensively. Fortunately, I have passed CET 6 and obtained several rewards, such as scholarship and outstanding student .
After graduating, I worked as an engineer assistant in an engineering company for a year. And I was mainly responsible for designing, planning, and operation in wastewater treatment and waste gas treatment. Well, the practical experience bring me profounder understanding of theory . This practical experience gave me a more profound understanding of theory. The more I learned about this field, the more I became interested in it. I However, became to However, I came to realize what I learned as an undergraduate student wasn’t enough for my work and my future plan. That’s why I decided to resign from my job to and pursue further study last year.
I am a person with perseverance. Also, I am full of passion and responsibility. I hope I could enrich my knowledge and understanding in pollution control projects in my postgraduate study.
That’s all about me. Thank you for your attention."I worked as an engineer assistant in an engineering company for a year." You should consider eliminating the word "engineer" at least once in this sentence. Either go with "I worked as an assistant at an engineering company for a year" or "I worked as an engineering assistant for a year." Is it more important that you worked at an engineering company, or as an engineering assistant?
0 votedMarch 12, 20181she or he
He looks like Uncle but in fact, he is a college student. Although he is not handsome, he is very popular with girls. He is a very considerate and good tempered person, never angry with me even when I was joking with him. What's more, he always buys my favorite food for me and helps me when I'm in need. He is also very patient with my willfulness. When I'm bored, I like to keep calling his name because he will respond to me every time with no impatient impatience. Sometimes when I quarrel with my older sister, he will come out to discourage (it). He did He's done many things for me and our my sisters but never complained. Despite that, he is always being bullied by us, we still love him . He is my brother.The sentence "Despite that he is always bullied by us, we still love him" would probably sound more natural if you said something like "Even though we are always bullying him, we still love him."
0 votedMarch 12, 20180
