English homework
(please help me correct the composition)
A few years ago,I still remember that day is rain,
I forgot bring my umbrella,and she Immediately put everything down,and then riding a motorcycle in the heavy rain to pick me up,I feel so blessed at that moment,who is she? she is my mother!! Never to
complain with everything,always for us to pay .
If you do not have her,I really don't know how to
be good.
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English homework (please help me correct the composition)
A few years ago,I still remember that day is rain,I still remember that rainy day a few years ago.
I forgot bring my umbrella,and she Immediately put everything down,and then riding a motorcycle in the heavy rain to pick me up,
I forgot to bring my umbrella. She immediately dropped everything and rode a motorcycle in the heavy rain to pick me up.
I feel felt so blessed at that moment.
Who is she? she is my mother!!
The rest does not make much sense in English:
Never to
complain with everything,always for us to pay .
??
If you do not have her,I really don't know how to
be good.
Do you maybe mean:
I would not know what to do without her?
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