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A story from my Teacher
Today,I heard a story from my English teacher。She told us that she broke up with her boyfriend. She is determined to forgetting him。I learned several love experiences through the example although I haven't fallen in love with someone。Great job. Not much to correct here. Keep up the great work.
0 votedNovember 16, 20160A trip to Porto Seguro – Bahia – Brasil!
Hi, everybody! How are you?
I’ve been to a wonderful place these past few days . I went to Porto Seguro, a beautiful city in the Brasilian state of Bahia!
The city is over 800 km (497,09 miles) from Itabira, my city in the state of Minas Gerais.
I travelled with my mother and my father. We went out of Itabira around 4:30 am and left our car in a parking lot nearby to the Confins International Airport (A tip for you: it’s cheaper to leave the car in a parking lot close by the airport instead of inside the airport parking lot).
Our flight left at 9:15 am and we made a connection to Salvador. We arrived to Porto Seguro around 12:30 pm. The trip was very quiet.
On landing, we went to the Hotel and a Tour Guide offered us a three-day tour, but the price was not good. We decided to visit the city and its surroundings or on our own and this was the best decision we made. We rented a car, whose price was much better than that offered by the tour guide.
We saw some beaches of Porto Seguro, such as the Mundaí Beach and the Taperapuã Beach. Withal*, we went to the a beautiful beach named Coroa Vermelha Beach, which belongs to Santa Cruz Cabrália, another city so very close to Porto Seguro.
The next day, we to Arraial D’Ajuda, a district of Porto Seguro. To get to Arraial D’Ajuda, it’s necessary to cross a very small section of the sea on a ferry. It takes about 8 minutes to crossing. The delay in the queue is worth it because it is a beautiful place with beautiful beaches such as Parracho Beach, where we almost stayed all day in at the Kailua Restaurant beach bar.
Then we did a quick pass in Trancoso, another district of Porto Seguro, which is a few kilometers after away from Arraial D’Ajuda.
At the end of the day, we rerturned to Porto Seguro to rest.
The next day, we came back to the Coroa Vermelha Beach, because we loved this beach and also enjoyed the craft fair with several different souvenirs we could buy for our relatives and friends. We stayed all the day in at the Cabana Ponta dos Corais Restaurant beach bar.
It was an unforgettable trip. We loved it and we intend to come back with all the whole family, my sisters and my brothers in law.
These are some memories that I selected to illustrate a few days of my vacation! Hugs.* not sure what word you were trying to use here.
Great job! I hope this helps.Joyfully,
Levi
0 votedJuly 30, 20162Tonight I'm alone
Tonight I stay with myself.My baby is sleeping in her grandmother's house.Her performance is not very good.So I send her to her grandmother's house as a punishment. Because She doesn't like living in her grandma's house. I know I was wrong, I didn't give her a complete warm home, but I can't change the status.This correction is to the individual sentences.
Tonight, I am by myself. My baby is sleeping at her grandmother's house. I sent her to her grandmother's house as a punishment. She doesn't like staying at her grandma's house. I know I was wrong. I haven't given her a complete warm home, but I can't change the statues.
This correction is on the context of the paragragh to make it flow better or make a little more sense.
Tonight, I am by myself. (Or you could just say, ) Tonight, I am alone. My daughter is sleeping at her grandmother's house. I sent her to her grandmother's house as a punishment. As she doesn't like staying at her grandmother's house. I know I was wrong. I haven't giving her a completely warm home to grow up in, but I can't change the situation.
Question for you is your baby an actual baby? Or were you trying to say baby as a term of endearment? Or did you mean to say child or daughter?
In this case I would use the word my child or my daughter because she sounds old enough to know right from wrong.
The word status means: the position or rank of someone or something when compared to others.
Situation is a better word in this case. As it means: the set of things thar are happening and the conditions that exist at a certian time and place.
I hope this helps. Let me know if you have any questions.
0 votedJuly 4, 20160- Go back to the basics... have a native speaker sound out all the letters and letter combinations that are tricky. then repeat them over and over again. listen to them first then repeat them. Always go back to the basics. Also watch the people that are speaking english. what does there mouth do. is it open or closed. If you are having a really hard time you can always ask someone like myself to help you. Unlocking the tongue is also learning where the words or sounds are placed in the mouth and the position of the tongue. I hoped this help. if you have other questions just ask.0 votedJune 26, 20160
- 'n Fliek in die begraafplaas Naweek, Ek kyk die film "Mean Girls" in 'n begraafplaas. Ek gaan met vriende. Die begraafplaas is 'n beroemd een in Hollywood. Baie beroemd mense begrawe daar. Oud Hollywood sterre. Dit is nie griselig nie. Dit is baie pratige en snaaks. Drie duisend vyf honder mense kom kyk die fliek. Ons het geeet a toebroodjies en appelwyn gedrink. Dit was a goet naweek. Sou jy sien 'n fliek in 'n begraagplaas? Die sonsondergang in die begraafplaas met al die mense.
June 9, 201620 - Hede/Toekoms/Verlede Net gewerk op Hede/Toekoms/Verlede Dankie vir jou help. Ek sien Ek sal sien Ek het gesien. Hy teken Hy sal teken Hy het geteken Ons reis Ons sal reis Ons het gereis Hulle verf die huis Hulle sal verf die huis Hulle het die huis geverf Sy wag vir hom. Sy sal wag vir hom. Sy het vir hom gewag. Anna kyk die fliek Saterdag Anna sal kyk die fliek Saterdag Anna het die fliek Saterdag gekyk. Ek laat die hond in. Ek sal laat die hond in. Ek het die hond in gelaat. Ek vat my pille Ek sal vat my pille Ek het my pille gevat. Sy vlek haar rop. Sy sal vlek haar rop. Sy het haar rop gevlek. Jy druk die lewer. Jy sal druk die lewer. Jy het de lewer gedruk. Sara eet die sjokolade. Sara sal eet die sjokolade. Sara het die sjokolade geeet. Julle trek 'n kat Julle sal trek 'n kat Julle het 'n kat getrek. Jy ontwikkel die film. Jy sal ontwikkel die film. Jy het die film ontwikkel.April 14, 201640
Wedding
Yesterday my best friend told me that he married in october,. I am very happy for them, They are two fantastic person.
Antonello is the groome name, I have known him since elementary school and He has always been my best friend.
Antonello has known Elisa ten years ago during one holiday, Elisa is a beautiful girl but not more nice :)
I am happy for them and I hope that will be a beautiful wedding
ThanksYesterday, my best friend told me that he got married in October. I am very happy for them. They are two fantastic people.
Antonello is the grooms name. I have known him since elementary school and he has always been my best friend.Antonello has known Elisa for ten years. They met during a holiday. Elisa is a beautiful girl, and very nice.
I am happy for them and I hope that they will have a beautiful marriage.
Thanks
Yellow is just small corrections. Green is what I think you were trying to say.
Great job. Keep it up!
0 votedApril 13, 20160
