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Tonight I'm alone Tonight I stay with myself.My baby is sleeping in her grandmother's house.Her performance is not very good.So I send her to her grandmother's house as a punishment. Because She doesn't like living in her grandma's house. I know I was wrong, I didn't give her a complete warm home, but I can't change the status.

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Tonight I'm alone

Tonight I stay with myself.My baby is sleeping in her grandmother's house.Her performance is not very good.So I send her to her grandmother's house as a punishment. Because She doesn't like living in her grandma's house. I know I was wrong, I didn't give her a complete warm home, but I can't change the status.

This correction is to the individual sentences.

Tonight, I am by myself. My baby is sleeping at her grandmother's house. I sent her to her grandmother's house as a punishment. She doesn't like staying at her grandma's house. I know I was wrong. I haven't given her a complete warm home, but I can't change the statues. 

This correction is on the context of the paragragh to make it flow better or make a little more sense.  

Tonight, I am by myself. (Or you could just say, ) Tonight, I am alone. My daughter is sleeping at her grandmother's house. I sent her to her grandmother's house as a punishment. As she doesn't like staying at her grandmother's house. I know I was wrong. I haven't giving her a completely warm home to grow up in, but I can't change the situation. 

Question for you is your baby an actual baby? Or were you trying to say baby as a term of endearment? Or did you mean to say child or daughter? 

In this case I would use the word my child or my daughter because she sounds old enough to know right from wrong. 

 The word status means: the position or rank of someone or something when compared to others. 

Situation is a better word in this case. As it means: the set of things thar are happening and the conditions that exist at a certian time and place.

I hope this helps. Let me know if you have any questions. 

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