IELTS WRITING TOPIC: Some people think that a sense of competitioINGn in children should be encouraged.Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Children are always the most important generation in the country who will decide the countries’ future.How to teach younger people has been paid more and more attention to.While,people had two opinions about education “competition” and “co-operation” Having a sense of competition to face today’s knowledge-based economy is very necessary.In most places,resources are less than before.In particular,job opportunities.As you can see,nowadays workforce has been replaced by computers and robots.Therefore,unless children are excellent at one or some parts or better than others it will be impossible for them to find a job.In this case,expand competition spirit are in a hurry.In addition,when human are in the competition,this environment always can give then stress which can let them work hard and this will definitely help them achieve their goal. However,too strong sense of competition has disadvantages which will make children to be selfish and do not know how to share .So,co-operation is also very important.Working together could help children develop social skills such as communication skills and team spirit.They need to work together to achieve the goal so in this process they would reach their potential and work closely with their team members.Another part i would like to mention is teamwork are always more effectively than personal work because everyone have their own advantages when they co-operate they can learn from each other and expand their minds,update their skills and broaden their knowledge. In short,having a sense of competition and co-operate are both very important.Young generation need to achieve a balance of them and to develop themselves,finish their dreams.