A letter for local newspaper (IELTS)

Dear sir or madam,

Hello. My name is Tom and I have been living live near the airport. I am writing this letter to let you know my complaints and opinions about an expanding construction of the airport the construction to expand the airport, starting from beginning at the end of this month.

According to the public comment issued last week on TV, the airport will be changed from domestic to international. It mean. This means I would have to suffer through a large amount of noises and a lots of traffic congestion around the airport. Furthermore, many people from a variety of countries are running around across our town. It might be cause of criminal. They might cause a crime.*

But, in on the other hand, many tourists will spend a lot of money for sightseeing, such as buying souvenirs and foods. It is definitely a benefit for our local community and it also a chance to put our town on the map for the world.

So for that reason, I accept this project only on the one condition that is they do not flight fly any planes during the night time which from about 10:00 pm to 6:00 am.

Thank you for your attention.
Yours sincerely,
Tom

こんにちはともあき、いいですよ！手紙はとても面白いですね。I put an asterisk next to one of the corrections because I was a bit unsure about what you meant by the sentence previously. Please let me know if my correction was what you meant. I hope these corrections helped!

- グロリア

I registered in on a Couch Surfing website

I registered in on a Couch Surfing website. It is a hospitality and social networking service accessible via a website. Hosts are not allowed to charge for lodging.
The purpose is not to earn money but to interact with guests.
My husband and I are staying in Wernigerode city in Germany for 3 days.
My husband is going to go up Mt. Brocken to take pictures of steam locomotives by himself. It is about 2000m above the sea.
He wants to go up by train and wants to walk downhill from 2000m to 1000m. He attaches crampons to his boots and walks with a ski pole.
I don’t have any experience, so I don’t know how much if it is a dangerous plan.
If I walk downhill with him, I might have an accident in the snow mountains. I think it is reckless of him to male make a plans to walk downhill alone.
I will go down by the steam locomotive and meet a German internet friend in front of the Wernigerode station at 3:00 in the afternoon.
She called Her name is Gabi.
She is a 53 years old woman who lives near the my booking hotel. She has a husband and 3 daughters. She works in a hospital as an anesthesiologist.
She has invited 10 guests for free of charge to interact with guests. Her eldest daughter's boyfriend is going to Japan on a business trip.
Her middle daughter is a 17 years old senior high school student. The daughter is going to Namibia in Africa to study English as an exchange student.
My friend Gabi is very open –minded and interested in Japanese culture. We live chatted in on WhatsApp .
Gabi will take me to a Baumkuchen factory to see how to make a baumkuchen and I would like to eat a fresh baumukuchen at the café.
It could be an interesting talking with her.
If my husband has caught a cold , she must be help me. (I hope she can help me.) I am excited to see her on  in March.

Easier said than done

The phrase "easier said than done" means that saying something is always easy, whereas doing something is difficult. It describes the a situation that where a person says a lot but does nothing. So before you say it, do some hard works first.ly

Thanks for reading, and I wish hope you have a nice day.

I hope these corrections helped! I changed "wish" to "hope" in the last sentence because it sounds strange and is not ever said. Let me know if you have any questions!

Gloria グロリア

Hello!

Hello my friends. My name's Tiago, and I live in Brazil with my parents. I'm I like that to talk about traveling, new culture, and videos on in the youtube about other countries. and I hope to meet know new people here.
I need to improve my english, and I think that here I can achieve my objective. If somebody to wants to learn Portuguese, I am able dispost to teach. Thanks very much guys!!!

Good luck on your journey to make new friends on this website! If you have any questions, you are welcome to ask me.
Best of luck,
- Gloria

Practice

Hi, this is the first time than i do it I've done this. My name is Leidy and I am have 24 years old. I have a of married  been married for 4 months. I am from Cartagena, Colombia. I want to be a person whith with an excellent grasp excelent domain of the English's Language. I want to read many books without needing whithout needding a dictionary and a translator. I want to find a person who can helps me with improve my the fluency and writingwritting very as well.

I like the Christian's music, such as Hillsong and Jesus Culture. I also like the Tv shows such as Criminal Minds.

I hope my corrections helped you! Let me know if you have any questions, I am happy to help you improve your English.
Best of luck!
- Gloria 

Writing an email

Dear Mr.Rogers,

How are you?
We need to fix the washing machine because the noise from it is very high loud and is impossible to use daily. We are thinking that the main shaft there is has a big gap or clearance clearence between the shaft surface and the bearing. I find the noise is caused by this gap and maybe needs to either be adjusted or the bearing the bearing needs to be exchanged. I hope your company can help me with this problem because the neighbors are complaining with to me almost everyday !

Could you help me with this questions issue? 

Best Regards,

Bruno.

I hope my corrections helped and this issues with the washing machines gets resolved!
- Gloria

And the study continues...

1. This is the music I listen to the most.
2. One of the things I like most about him is the his smile.
3. What I enjoy most about this music is its beat.
4. Jupiter is the largest planet in our solar system.
5. Caroline is the most beautiful girl on the earth.
6.This hill is more tilted than that.
7.Here is the busiest man on the earth.
8.You can make more money more than I can. Enough wanting!
9. According opinion polls, this is the saddest country in the world.
10.The book that John gave me is more difficult to read than that the one Teylor gave me.

Hope my corrections helped!

- Gloria