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A letter for local newspaper (IELTS) Dear sir or madam Hello. My name is Tom and I have been living near the airport. I am writing this letter to let you know my complaint and opinion about an expanding construction of the airport, starting from the end of this month. According to the public comment issued last week on TV, the airport will be changed from domestic to international. It mean. I would have to suffer a large amount of noises and a lots of traffic congestion around the airport. Furthermore, many people from a variety of countries are running around across our town. It might be cause of criminal. But in other hand , many tourists will spend a lot of money for sightseeing, buying souvenirs and foods. It is definitely a benefit for our local community and it also chance to put our town on the map for the world. So that reason, I accept this project only one condition that is they do not flight any planes during the night time which from about 10:00 pm to 6:00 am. Thank you for attention. Your sincerely. Tom

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A letter for local newspaper (IELTS)

Dear sir or madam,

Hello. My name is Tom and I have been living live near the airport. I am writing this letter to let you know my complaints and opinions about an expanding construction of the airport the construction to expand the airport, starting from beginning at the end of this month.

According to the public comment issued last week on TV, the airport will be changed from domestic to international. It mean. This means I would have to suffer through a large amount of noises and a lots of traffic congestion around the airport. Furthermore, many people from a variety of countries are running around across our town. It might be cause of criminal. They might cause a crime.*

But, in on the other hand, many tourists will spend a lot of money for sightseeing, such as buying souvenirs and foods. It is definitely a benefit for our local community and it also a chance to put our town on the map for the world.

So for that reason, I accept this project only on the one condition that is they do not flight fly any planes during the night time which from about 10:00 pm to 6:00 am.

Thank you for your attention.
Yours sincerely,
Tom

こんにちはともあき、いいですよ!手紙はとても面白いですね。I put an asterisk next to one of the corrections because I was a bit unsure about what you meant by the sentence previously. Please let me know if my correction was what you meant. I hope these corrections helped!

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