Beat your shyness (PLEASE correct my mistakes including the use of commma and period) thanks

Hi, bud ("buddy" or "friend" might fit better here), I read your message.  You did well contacting me.  I used to be shy like you.  As a resuult, I didn’t go out with friends, and I spent a lot of time at home, not talking to anyone.  I recommend you quit playing video games and start talking with your parents.  Actually, I think this is the best way to learn how to have a conversation.  I did it too (or a better way to say this last sentence may be..."It worked for me."). 

The next step is to have small conversationa with friends or strangers, anyone.  It doesn’t matter if you see that person on the bus, in a mall, or at a grocery store, you just have to start a small conversation, in order for you to overcome your shyness.  Doing this will enable you to have conversations with anyone.  You will improve your conversational skills, making your conversations more interesting and better. 

My point is that you have to practice to make your conversational skills better, despite how hard it is, because if you give up and don’t practice, you will waste your time.  So, you have to be constant and have fun.  Don’t take it seriously, just do it to meet new people and make friends.

Greetings and work hard

Commentors Notes:  You did a great job writing in English.  I hope my comments/corrections are helpful for you.  Keep up the good work.