Beat your shyness (PLEASE correct my mistakes including the use of commma and period) thanks

Hi, bud ("buddy" or "friend" might fit better here), I read your message.  You did well contacting me.  I used to be shy like you.  As a resuult, I didn’t go out with friends, and I spent a lot of time at home, not talking to anyone.  I recommend you quit playing video games and start talking with your parents.  Actually, I think this is the best way to learn how to have a conversation.  I did it too (or a better way to say this last sentence may be..."It worked for me."). 

The next step is to have small conversationa with friends or strangers, anyone.  It doesn’t matter if you see that person on the bus, in a mall, or at a grocery store, you just have to start a small conversation, in order for you to overcome your shyness.  Doing this will enable you to have conversations with anyone.  You will improve your conversational skills, making your conversations more interesting and better. 

My point is that you have to practice to make your conversational skills better, despite how hard it is, because if you give up and don’t practice, you will waste your time.  So, you have to be constant and have fun.  Don’t take it seriously, just do it to meet new people and make friends.

Greetings and work hard

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Beat your shyness (PLEASE correct my mistakes including the use of commma and period) thanks

Greetings Bud: I read your message and let me tell you that you did well contacting me. I used to be shy like you and as a result, I didn’t used to go out with friends and I spend a lot of time in my house without talking to anyone. So I recommend you leave the video games and start talking with your parents. I think this is the best way to learn how to have a conversation. I actually did it too. 

The next step is to have a small conversation with an unknown person. It doesn’t matter if you see that person in in a bus, a mall or a grocery store; you just have to start a small conversation in order to beat your shyness. Doing that you will be able to have a conversation with more people subsequently, and you will make your conversations interesting and better. 

My point is that you have to practice to make your conversational skills better, despite how hard it is. Because if you give up and don’t practice, you will waste your time. So, you have to be constant and have fun doing it. Don’t take it seriously; just try to meet new people and make friends.

Best wishes and work hard

Beat your shyness (PLEASE correct my mistakes including the use of commma and period) thanks

Hi bud i read your message and let me tell you that you did well contacting me. I used to be shy like you; As a result, I didn’t use to go out with friends and I spent a lot of time in my house without talking to anyone. So, I suggest you leave the video games and start talking to your parents. I think this is the best way to learn how to have a conversation. Actually, I did it too.

The next step is to have a small conversation with unknown person. It doesn’t matter if you see that person in a bus, a mall or a grocery store, you should just start the conversation. In order to overcome your shyness, doing this will help you easily have a conversation with everybody. Comsequently, you will be able to make your conversation more interesting and better. 

My point is that you should practice to improve your speaking skill regardless how hard it is. Because if you give up and don’t practice, you will just waste your time. So, you have to be persistent and have fun while doing this, don’t take it seriously, just do it when you meet new people and just make friends!

**this is only my opinion that might not be entirely correct and can have some mistakes.**

I think your article is motivational and GREAT!! Thank you for such a good article!

Greetings and work hard