I'm into watching English TV series

I watched 3 episode [episodes] of season 1 "orange is the new black" yesterday.
It was difficult for me to understand the story without subtitle [subtitles], but I still think that the TV series is interesting!

Hi Sara!

I love that show! Season 1 is so addictive...keep watching :-)

- Kim

Hi Katie!

Great presentation! It's totally normal to feel nervous before public speaking, especially in another language! You are so brave to be doing that, so best of luck to you! I've just underlined some tiny errors and put the corrections in bold for you. If you would like to practice your speech on Skype, I'd be happy to talk to you - just send me a PM :-) Maybe speaking in front of me, a stranger, would help calm your nerves. 

To avoid looking down at your notes too much, how about putting 'key words' in bold and larger text, so that if you forget what you were going to talk about, you can quickly look down and the word will catch your eye and you can get back on track with your presentation? 

Good luck, Katie!

- Kim

Presentation in 10 Hours

I have a presentation in the next 10 hours. I have to present it in English and I am very nervous for it. It is a group presentation for 3 people. Everyone has 3 mins. I just started to prepare it few hours ago. I know for a English native speaker, it is not a big deal. But for me, I am afraid that I can't speak it very fluently. I have practiced it a lot of time but I made mistakes everytimes. Although I think I can take a note during presentation, I can't just read it all the time and lower my head, can I? But everytimes I raise my head and try to recite the content, I always forgot it and seem like a stutter. I always say ' En.... And... A....En.... And...' something like that. I think if I raise my head to look at audience, I will be worse that what I do right now.

Here is my note:

Today I want to talk about 3D printing and 3D modeling. What is 3D printing? 3D printing refers to create [creating] a three-dimensional object by laying down successive layers of material. So how does the 3d printer work? Well, it is quite similar to a normal printer but a little bit different. First, we don't need to put an ink cartridge into it, but instead, we need special printing materials, like plastic, rubber, or even a matel [metal]. We don't print a boring text document, but a 3d real life model which you can make it in [on] your own computer.
3D printing is also called additive manufacturing. In our traditional industry, we always use subtractive manufacturing. So what is the difference between these two things? As we can see in the picture, Subtractive manufacturing removes materials and Additive manufacturing adds layers of material.
So next, I want to talk about its application. In [the] medical world, 3d printer [printers] can be used to print some special biological materials like hearts, ears, bones and skins [skin]. 3D printing is also very popular in [the] fashion world. There is a fashion designer who is able to use 3d printer [printers] to print a [remove 'a'] sunglasses and he put it on his models on [during] fashion week. In the future, maybe  3D printer [printers] can be used to print another 3D printer. That will be pretty cool!!!!

Hi Luis!

I have underlined any errors and put the corrections in bold. I hope this helps!

In response to your question, I think being a volunteer is great and everyone should do it! I agree if everyone spent some of their free time using their skills to help others, the world could be a better place. I used to volunteer in Dubai a few years ago - I helped at a school for children with special needs and I really enjoyed it. Have you ever volunteered? 

- Kim.

What do you thing [think] about to be [being] a volunteer?

I think it's great if you can spend some of your spare time improving your skills as you help [with] good projects.
If everyone would [remove this word] spend [spent] their spare time applying their knowledge and skills to help others, the world could be a better place.
What do you thing [think] about to be [being] a volunteer?
Have you [ever] been a volunteer anytime [remove this word]?

Hi Joy!

I have underlined any errors and put the corrections in bold.I hope this helps.

A very well written piece - well done!

- Kim.

My favourite singer

My favourite singer is JJ Lin. He is a song writer from Singapore. He was born in 1981 .When he [was] 4 years old, he started to play the classic [classical] piano. Music was a brand new world for him to express his feeling. When he was in high school, he enjoyed writing songs with his piano . However, he was a little bit shy and didn't know how to show his talent. In a singing competition, he was discovered by a Chinese recording company and started his singing career. At first, he faced a lot of failure but with his effort, he wrote a successful song 'Remember' and began to become famous. Later on, he wrote many albums and became a hit in Asia .

I like him not only because of his story ,but also his singing techniques. He is really good at head voice [I'm not sure what you mean by 'head voice'? Could you please explain to me?] and his voice is flexible and strong. He can sing as high as ladies and his low voice is amazing as well. He can balance his high voice [do you mean 'high pitch'?] and chest voice [do you mean 'low pitch'?] perfectly .

His songs are a combination of western [Western] and eastern [Eastern]music and a milestone of [in] Chinese pop music .

Hi Ann!

I have underlined any errors and put the corrections in bold. 

I hope this helps!

- Kim.

My favorite movie

Hi everyone! I am from Russia and I want to talk about my favorite movie.

My favorite movie is Biri Gyaru. This movie motivates [ really inspires me.] me very hard, [.] after [After] wathching [watching] [it,] I want [to] learn Japanese language [remove this] and go to Japan. This is strange:D

[The] Girl [girl] from [in] this movie was very silly, but her mother found [a] very good teacher for her.
This teacher help[helped] [the] girl go to the best university in the country.
Everytime [Whenever], when [remove this] I  become lazy[,] I watch this movie[.]

Here is the corrected version:

My favorite movie

Hi everyone! I am from Russia and I want to talk about my favorite movie.

My favorite movie is Biri Gyaru. This movie really inspires me. After watching it, I want to learn Japanese and go to Japan. This is strange :D

The girl in the movie was very silly, but her mother found a very good teacher for her.

This teacher helped the girl go to the best university in the country.

Whenever I become lazy, I watch this movie.

Eat sushi

I will have a backpack travel to [go backpacking in] Tokyo in September.
Today I started to find[look for/look up] delicious sushi restaurant [restaurants] in Tokyo, so I can visit it [them].
After I read several articles and saw the photographs of sushi. [,] I decided to take [have]  dinner at a sushi restaurant nearby my house.
This sushi restaurant is a chain restaurant and every disk [dish] has the same price, about 1 USD, and that's why I like to visit it.
I [definitely like] sushi, but [I've never visited during the weekdays before] visiting during the weekdays is never happened before.
I am looking forward to the trip.
Hope it comes soon [This phrase doesn't sound very natural - maybe try 'I can't wait!'].