My new tatto
I have a new tatto. I did it two weeks ago. I have more tattos but this is the best because I did it with my cousin. We are the same age, she was born on may 3th and I on may 7th at the same year. So she is four days older than me. She lives far from my city and we see little.
Always we have wanted to have a tatto together and this was the moment. We looked for a tatto for us and we found a phrase: "Maybe in distance but always in heart". This defines pretty well. And now we have a tatto for always in the arm that unites us.
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My new tattoo
I have a new tattoo. I did (more common: got) it two weeks ago. I have more tattoos but this is the best because I did it(or: got it) with my cousin. We are the same age, she was born on May 3th and I on May 7th at of the same year. So she is four days older than me. She lives far from my city and we see little of each other.Always we have wanted to have get a tattoo together and this was the moment. We looked for a tattoo for us and we found a the phrase: "Maybe in distance but always in heart"(I found this on google: Maybe in distance but never in heart). This defines us pretty well. And now we have a tattoo on our arms that forever will unite us. for always in the arm that unites us.
Good job!
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Hi Ana!
I've underlined the mistakes and put the corrections in bold :-) Hope this helps!
Kim
My new tatto [tattoo]
I have a new tatto [tattoo]. I did [got] it two weeks ago. I have more tattos [tattoos] but this is the best because I did it with my cousin. We are the same age, [;] she was born on may [May] 3th [3rd] and I on may [May] 7th at [of] the same year. So [it's better to join the last sentence with this one; "...of the same year, so she is four days older than me"] she is four days older than me. She lives far from my city and ['so' would be a better word instead of 'and'] we see little [we don't see each other often or maybe we rarely see each other].Always we [We have always wanted...] have wanted to have [get] a tatto [tattoo] together and this was the moment. We looked for a tatto [tattoo] for us and we found a phrase: "Maybe in distance but always in heart". This defines [defines us]pretty well. And [omit 'and'...we usually don't start sentences with 'and'] now we have a tatto [tattoo] for always in [on] the arm [our arms] that unites us ["Now we have a tattoo on our arms that will always unite us"]
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My new tattoo
I have a new tattoo. I got it done did it two weeks ago. I have more tattoos but this is the best because I got it done did it with my cousin. We are the same age, she was born on mMay 3th 3rd and I on mMay 7th at of the same year. So s She is four days older than me. She lives far from my city and we see little of each other.Always wWe have always wanted to have get a tattoo together and this was the moment. We looked for a tattoo design for us and we found a phrase: "Maybe in distance but always in heart". This defines us pretty well. And We now we have a arm tattoos on our arms for always in the arm that that will always unites us.
Good job Ana! I've made some grammatical and structural corrections for you. The names of the months are always capitalised and the word 'tattoo' has two O's.
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My new tattoo
I have a new tattoo. I did it two weeks ago. I have more tattoos but this one is the best because I did it with my cousin. We are the same age, she was born on may 3th and I on may 7th of the same year so she is four days older than me. She lives far from my city and we see each other little (or 'infrequently').We have always wanted to get a tattoo together and this was the moment. We looked for a tattoo for us and we found a phrase: "Maybe in distance but always in heart". This defines us pretty well. Now we have a tattoo for always on our arms that unites us.
Muy bien hecho Ana, errores pequeños.
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oh! Thanks :D
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