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My favourite singer My favourite singer is JJ Lin .He is a song writer from Singapore .He was born in 1981 .When he 4 years old ,he started to play the classic piano .Music was a brand new world for him to express his feeling .When he was in high school ,he enjoyed writing songs with his piano .However ,he was a little bit shy and didn't know how to show his talent .In a singing competition ,he was discovered by a Chinese recording company and started his singing career .At first ,he faced a lot of failure but with his effort ,he wrote a successful song 'Remember' and began to become famous .Later on, he wrote many albums and became a hit in Asia . I like him not only because of his story ,but also his singing techniques .He is really good at head voice and his voice is flexible and strong .He can sing as high as ladies and his low voice is amazing as well .He can balance his high voice and chest voice perfectly . His songs are a combination of western and eastern music and a milestone of Chinese pop music .

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Hi Joy!

I have underlined any errors and put the corrections in bold.I hope this helps.

A very well written piece - well done!

- Kim.

My favourite singer

My favourite singer is JJ Lin. He is a song writer from Singapore. He was born in 1981 .When he [was] 4 years old, he started to play the classic [classical] piano. Music was a brand new world for him to express his feeling. When he was in high school, he enjoyed writing songs with his piano . However, he was a little bit shy and didn't know how to show his talent. In a singing competition, he was discovered by a Chinese recording company and started his singing career. At first, he faced a lot of failure but with his effort, he wrote a successful song 'Remember' and began to become famous. Later on, he wrote many albums and became a hit in Asia .

I like him not only because of his story ,but also his singing techniques. He is really good at head voice [I'm not sure what you mean by 'head voice'? Could you please explain to me?] and his voice is flexible and strong. He can sing as high as ladies and his low voice is amazing as well. He can balance his high voice [do you mean 'high pitch'?] and chest voice [do you mean 'low pitch'?] perfectly .

His songs are a combination of western [Western] and eastern [Eastern]music and a milestone of [in] Chinese pop music .

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