Hi Lucie,

I am from California,  US..   I have always wanted to learn your language

and would be glad to help you.  Let me know what format you have in mind.

...  i.e.

writing,,  like we are now.

voice on Skype or whatever the latest thing is

... and so on

bye for now...     

oh yah,    my name is John.     = )

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Hello Eva Chang..

Thank you for the wonderful video and positive emotional story. 

I think I understand the message..  Today is the day to show and 

to tell those close to us how much we appreciate them.   We can

not be reminded often enough of this point.   I also enjoyed seeing

your Country,  I am totally fascinated with so many things there.

I am going to try to find a video for you..

https://youtu.be/W-TE_Ys4iwM   

..  i hope you like it        (  I like yours  )

-  my name is John 

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Kayla,   

If I were you..     

       I would listen to Tempus  ( the well spoken bobcat )

and @Natalia,   if I may..   and please believe me when I say that this is meant to be helpful.  It is very clear that you are dedicated and that you let very few things if any get between you and whatever it is you want to learn,  but depending on your objective -  I guess it would not be necessary in all vocations yet...   I think it would serve you well if you would not only learn every grammatically correct use and spelling of this and that,  etc., etc..   but,  ummm,  ...    how do I say this..   pls  allow me to use one of the best examples of what I mean by example..     I am referring to the kind,  pleasant, genuine and grateful manner that is within every sentence that Kayla writes..      I know it sounds unkind and most inappropriate...  but I say it with one intention,  and it is good and kind and true that I mention it hoping it benefits you.

Mr. Bennett,

I applaud your detection.  When you say you do not 

normally do such things,  especially on a language

site,  I think you will agree when I remind you respectfully

that this would be the most important of all times that a

correction should be made.  One question however,  I can 

not figure out why "spelling skills" is in bold..   oh well.  I 

may never know.  You are amongst the very few who is able 

to point out a mistake or error while without there being any

detection of malice,  judgement or negative energy.   This 

doesn't happen accidentally or without awareness and effort.

You should be commended and I will look in your direction

when in need of a Guide Post.

\

-  JT

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.. hi kayla,  

-  my plan is to take a look at your first paragraph this visit.  

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How do you like advertisements? It is useful?   (  i'm not sure which question you are asking..  )

    Is the writer ( you )  asking the reader    Question #1    or   Question #2

            Q1.     Are the ads useful to me as a Consumer?  Do they help and/or persuade me to purchase?

                    or

            Q2.     Are the ads effective for the business..  or as you mention further ahead,  only an irritation?

How do you like advertisements?  Are they useful?

How do you like advertisements?  Are they informative?

How do you like advertisements? Are they effective?  ( i would enjoy responding to that question if you ask )

Modern cities thrive with the explosion of business, along with which came advertising. Nowadays, people

..............................................................................................   wow,  i like it so very much!   ...................................   

are surrounded by a great variety of advertisements in every possible way, such as newspaper, website

--------------------------------------->     if advertisements is plural,   then   newspapers and websites  must be also.   

pages, spam emails, bus stop bulletins, and even movies are inserted with advertisements. Generally, we

.......   it is very true,  and a great observation,  while it is nearly perfect,  a slight correction is needed.   I will let you ponder / and think about it a little bit,  and see if you can figure out what it might be..   it is indeed a tricky one.. but somewhat fun if the individual is able to keep such a disposition and perspective.   I of course will share what I believe it to be upon my return.    

That's all for now.     I like the way you write,     ..  and think.     

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A short paragraph of my composition. Thank you for your help!

( Your use of words,  phrases and sentence structure continue to impress )

Some potential suggestions:

and that is why there were a lot of literary and scientific giants in the past. Nevertheless, the giants we know were only a small group of people who had access to educational resources, which were extremely scarce in the past, and the genius to be versed in a certain area.  ( i don't understand this part )  

Average people couldn’t get the equal chance.

Average people didn't have the same opportunites.

Moreover, it is because currently more people are highly educated, and the scientists have to cooperate and delve more deeply into a subject in order to make new discovery discoveries that they, as an individuals are not as well-known as the giants were in the past, but they are all outstanding and contributory have contributed to the human race.

I haven't established a standard for the way to do the corrections..  I will improve and make it easier to understand.  This next part is me highlighting the parts that I really like

It might be argued that in the past people had less entertainment and therefore concentrated more on study, and that is why there were a lot of literary and scientific giants in the past. Nevertheless, the giants we know were only a small group of people who had access to educational resources, which were extremely scarce in the past, and the genius to be versed in a certain area. Average people couldn’t get the equal chance. Moreover, it is because currently more people are highly educated, and the scientists have to cooperate and delve more deeply into a subject in order to make new discovery that they, as an individual, are not as well-known as the giants were in the past, but they are all outstanding and contributory to the human race.

JT