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1. The communal online encyclopedia has gained more and more popularity, however, some critics allege that people should be mindful of its disadvantages and that the traditional published encyclopedia is superior to the communal one.
2. I admit that the communal online encyclopedia is never perfect but its advantages greatly overwhelm its disadvantages.
3. No one can be one hundred percent definite that his work has no error at all. What is more important is that the errors can be examined and corrected as soon as possible.
4. The communal encyclopedia is supervised by all the online users, and inappropriate content can be altered immediately after several error reports; while it takes decades to correct the errors in the traditional encyclopedia since the publishing procedure takes much more time.
5. Additionally, protected by the secure system, it is not so easy for imprudent users and spiteful vandals or hackers to manipulate the content of the communal encyclopedia. Certain editors are working behind the system to monitor the websites, judge all the modifying requests, and eliminate those that are obviously malicious and incorrect.
6. Editors of the traditional encyclopedia do not have the space and flexibility to decide what to cover in several books, but the internet provides tremendous virtual space for the communal encyclopedia, which makes it possible for everyone to find something that fits their interest and broaden their horizons with infinite views and topics.
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Sentences in English, thank you for helping me.
1. The communal online encyclopedia, has gained more and more popularity, however, some critics allege that people should be mindful of its disadvantages and that the traditional published encyclopedia is superior to the communal one.> The communal online encyclopedia, Wikipedia, is becoming increasingly popular; however, there are critics who warn us about the potential inaccuracies of some of its content, and that the traditional published form is far more trustworthy.
2. I admit that the communal online encyclopedia is never perfect, but its advantages greatly overwhelm its disadvantages.
> I do agree that any online encyclopedia that is communal in nature can never be perfect, but its helpfulness, accessibility and coverage easily overwhelm all the flaws it might have.
3. No one can be one hundred percent definite that their his work has no error at all.( > is error free) What is more important is that these errors-- if there are any-- are noted can be examined and corrected as soon as possible and are corrected.
*His work > Use "singular they" to bypass this "he/she" gender issue. > The one who returns my stuff to me will get a reward for their effort.
4. The communal encyclopedia is supervised by all the online users, and inappropriate content can be altered immediately after several error reports; while it takes decades to correct the errors in the traditional encyclopedia since the publishing procedure takes much more time.> The communal encyclopedia is supervised by its online users, and any incorrect or inappropriate content that it present will be altered or deleted as soon as they are found, after they have been reported, whereas/while/ it may take decades for the published type to make any correction, as republishing anything is costly, if not time-consuming.
5. Additionally, protected by the secure system, it is not so easy for imprudent users and spiteful vandals or hackers to manipulate the content of the communal encyclopedia. Certain editors are working behind the system to monitor the websites, judge all the modifying requests, and eliminate those that are obviously malicious and incorrect.
> Besides that, being protected by a secure system , it is never easy for unscrupulous and imprudent online users, be they vandals or hackers, to manipulate the content of the communal encyclopedia. They have a team of editors overseeing the whole system, whose job is to monitor all the web pages, to take appropriate actions when an error report is received , and to delete any content that they deemed inappropriate.
6. Editors of the traditional encyclopedia do not have the space and flexibility to decide what to cover in several books ?, but the internet provides tremendous virtual space for the communal encyclopedia, which makes it possible for everyone to find something that fits their interest and broaden their horizons with infinite views and topics.
> Last but not least, publishers of traditional encyclopedias just do not have the ability to cover every subject matter that should in an encyclopedia, because it is just impossible for them to do so in book form. But the Internet, with its infinite " virtual space" is able to do exactly that, providing all of us with a medium to find more about whatever we want and broadening our horizon with its infinite subject matters and materials.
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I had forgotten how much I enjoy reading your entries. Also, when I began reading about your topic..
the "communal encyclopedia" it had taken me another 2 sections or paragraphs ( I think I figured it out while reading #4 ) if I am not mistaken you would be referring to Wikipedia. See, am I not incredibly brilliant?? That is me using sarcasm.. it is not brilliant, oh contraire ( french for ' quite the opposite' ) hardly brilliant at all when most people would have realized this while reading your first entry or entry #1.
I would go now to make corrections, but I saw so very few.. if any. I would mention that once again .. there were several uses of expressions and nuances that I find your use of them to be just absolutely incredible. We use the word incredible now ( at least in California ) to mean wonderful, impresssive, great, spectacular.. etc., I cannot think of anyone who would disagree with me at least like I said that shares the same geographic location. I only mention that because I'm almost certain that the true meaning of the word, when translated from it origin, which is almost all the time Latin means ...
in = not + credible = believable but I will standby what I had mentioned as far as how it is actually used. ............................................................................ I'm trying to figure out, what it is that you are destined to do.. cuz there is little doubt in my mind that you can and very likely will do some absolutely grand, notable and remarkable things.
- Prof. JT
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