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.. hi kayla,
- my plan is to take a look at your first paragraph this visit.
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How do you like advertisements? It is useful? ( i'm not sure which question you are asking.. )
Is the writer ( you ) asking the reader Question #1 or Question #2
Q1. Are the ads useful to me as a Consumer? Do they help and/or persuade me to purchase?
or
Q2. Are the ads effective for the business.. or as you mention further ahead, only an irritation?
How do you like advertisements? Are they useful?
How do you like advertisements? Are they informative?
How do you like advertisements? Are they effective? ( i would enjoy responding to that question if you ask )
Modern cities thrive with the explosion of business, along with which came advertising. Nowadays, people
.............................................................................................. wow, i like it so very much! ...................................
are surrounded by a great variety of advertisements in every possible way, such as newspaper, website
---------------------------------------> if advertisements is plural, then newspapers and websites must be also.
pages, spam emails, bus stop bulletins, and even movies are inserted with advertisements. Generally, we
....... it is very true, and a great observation, while it is nearly perfect, a slight correction is needed. I will let you ponder / and think about it a little bit, and see if you can figure out what it might be.. it is indeed a tricky one.. but somewhat fun if the individual is able to keep such a disposition and perspective. I of course will share what I believe it to be upon my return.
That's all for now. I like the way you write, .. and think.
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Firstly, advertising increases the exposure of products to a larger scale of people. Only by making more people know about its products, can the company reach and occupy a considerable market. At the beginning of this semester, an online fruit supplier employed a lot of students on campus to advertise for them. Almost everyone got their pamphlet with new store discount information on it. It covered all the demand of fruit in the entire campus within a week and made great profits at the start of its business.
Thank you for your help!
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