Reward For Virtue

My colleague, Jim, was an unfortunate person.  His father had got cancer of the stomach several years ago.  Last year, things got so bad that he immediately returned to his hometown.  He decided to take care of his father in his final stage of life.  First of all, he wrote out a long list of all the things which he had to do.  The list included:  washing the feet, cooking the meal, taking some photos, and so on.  But a week later, his father died at 55.  When we heard the bad news, we all felt very sympathetic.  Yesterday, he paid me a visit.  He rang the bell and I was very surprised to see him with a large parcel in his hand.  I led him into my room and asked him what's the matter.  He smiled and put the parcel on the desk.  He explained that he had bought something especially for me when he was on a business trip in Beijing.  Because I had given him financial assistance when his father was seriously ill, he was so touched that he had to reward me.  Then he showed me the contents of the parcel, it contained five bags of roast duck.

Good job!  Keep it up!  Keep going and you will get better.  (Be careful with commas.)