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    November 9, 2015
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    Kotatsu!!!

    Hello. I will talk about Kotatsu.
    Do you know Kotatsu?
    Kotatsu is a traditional heating system in Japan.
    Kotatsu is a low,wooden table frame coverd by a Ffuton.
    It is about the height of a coffee table.
    An electric heater is attached to the underside of the flame.
    Kotatsu makes all Japanese people feel happy.
    But make sure not to fall asleep by the Kotatsu.
    You will cacth a cold.

    Thank you for reading.
    If you find a mistake in my notebook, could you correct it?

     

    Futon isn't a proper noun, so there's no need to captalize it!

    Also, be careful about spaces bewtween commas. Instead of: "low , wooden", you would just write "low,wooden". There isn't really a need for spaces between the words and the commas.

    Anyway, you wrote so well, I'm very impressed!! ^O^

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    November 7, 2015
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  • Posted
    もうやだよ！(=ω=ﾒ) もう・・・やだよ！ いっぱいの友達がいる 毎日好きな物を食べます 先生たちも先輩たちも優しいく 好きなスポーツをやってる でもでも もうやだよ～　高学校もうやだよ！！ もう大人になりたいよΨ(｀∀´)Ψ すごい美人の大人になりたい！ テスト嫌い、宿題嫌い、バカ男の子大大大大嫌いなんだよ！ 平気、平気～┐(ﾟ～ﾟ)┌ だって、もう３年の後・・・自由になるよｗ がんばります！！
    November 4, 2015
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  • Corrected

    I went to the Rose garden in Osaka city.

     

     

    Hi. I went to the a Rrose garden in Osaka city.

    <em>You only need to capitalize "rose gardens" if the name of the garden itself is "rose". But if it's just a garden of roses, then it doens't need to be capital.</em>


    It was so beautiful, and the scent was so good.
    I saw many colorful flowers.
    There was yellow, pink, red and white.
    I love the deep pink roses.
    I took a picture in front of the deep pink roses.

    The reason why the "s" after rose is so important is because you didn't take a picture in front of just 1 rose (一つのバラ）, you took a picture in front of many roses　(多くのバラ)!

    This skirt is from LIZ LISA.
    I like it.

    Thank you for reading.
    If you find a mistake in my notebook, could you correct it?

     

    Mizuki, you worte so well, as always! 

    It looks liek yo had a fun day! ^^ I love roses as well, I like the light pink coloured ones!

    If you have any questions about my corrections, please feel free to ask!

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    November 4, 2015
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  • Corrected

    I cut my bangs.

    Hi.I will talk about my hair.
    I cut my bangs today.
    When I cut my bangs, I am often told that I look younger than my age.
    Japanese people often looks youger than their age.I wonder why?
    Flat nose? Black color hair? I don't know.
    Guess how old I am?I think that I look 23.Yes I'm 23.

    Thank you for your reading!
    If you find a mistake my notebook,could you correct it?

    Have a nice day!

     

    If you're wondering about any of the corrections, please feel free to ask for an explanation! ^^

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    November 3, 2015
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    November 3, 2015
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  • Posted
    ただいま！o(*’▽’*)/☆ﾟ’ ただいま！ すごい疲れたよ~｡･ﾟ(´□｀)ﾟ･｡ あのね、バドミントンやってる～ ２：１５時間学校から家に戻った～ ２：３０から４：３０までバドミントンやってる～ すごい楽しい(人･∀･) 春でテニスやりたい～ あー、サイテよｗ 勉強したいけど疲れて過ぎなんだよ｡･ﾟ(´□｀)ﾟ･｡ じゃねー♡
    November 2, 2015
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  • Answered
    お手洗い（おてあらい）はどこですか？ otearai wa doko desu ka? OR トイレはどこですか？ Toire wa doko desu ka?
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    November 1, 2015
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  • Posted
    はじめまして！♡自己紹介！ こんにちは！　初めての日記です！(人･∀･) ダラです。ダラちゃんでいいよ！ｗ ロシアのハーフです！ １５歳の高学校性です。 ホラー映画超好き！ｗ 好きなブランドって。。。やっぱーLizLisaだね！ Liz　Lisaとか、Swankissとか、Honey　Mi　Honeyとか大好きなんだよ～ ちょっと頭痛があったからこれでね～ ありがとう♡
    November 1, 2015
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