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Kotatsu!!! Hello. I will talk about Kotatsu. Do you know Kotatsu? Kotatsu is a traditional heating system in Japan. Kotatsu is a low , wood table frame coverd by Futon. It is about the height of a coffee table. An electric heater is attached to the underside of the flame. Kotatsu makes all Japanese people feel happy. But make sure not to fall asleep the Kotatsu. You will cacth a cold. Thank you for reading. If you find a mistake in my notebook, could you correct it?

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Kotatsu!!!

Hello. I will talk about Kotatsu.
Do you know Kotatsu?
Kotatsu is a traditional heating system in Japan.
Kotatsu is a low,wooden table frame coverd by a Ffuton.
It is about the height of a coffee table.
An electric heater is attached to the underside of the flame.
Kotatsu makes all Japanese people feel happy.
But make sure not to fall asleep by the Kotatsu.
You will cacth a cold.

Thank you for reading.
If you find a mistake in my notebook, could you correct it?

 

Futon isn't a proper noun, so there's no need to captalize it!

Also, be careful about spaces bewtween commas. Instead of: "low , wooden", you would just write "low,wooden". There isn't really a need for spaces between the words and the commas.

Anyway, you wrote so well, I'm very impressed!! ^O^

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Kotatsu!!!

Hello. I will talk about Kotatsu.
Do you know of Kotatsu?
Kotatsu are a traditional heating system in Japan.
A Kotatsu is a low, wooden table frame covered by a Futon.
It is about the height of a coffee table.
An electric heater is attached to the underside of the frame.
Kotatsu make all Japanese people feel happy.
But make sure not to fall asleep under the Kotatsu.
You will catch a cold.

Thank you for reading.
If you find a mistake in my notebook, could you correct it?

1

Kotatsu!!!

Hello. I will tell you/[talk] about Kotatsu.
Do you know Kotatsu?
Kotatsu is a traditional heating system in Japan.
Kotatsu is a low , wooden table frame covered by a Futon.
It is about the height of a coffee table.
An electric heater is attached to the underside of the frame.
Kotatsu makes all Japanese people feel happy,
but make sure not to fall asleep by the Kotatsu.
You will catch a cold.

Thank you for reading.
If you find a mistake in my notebook, could you correct it?

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