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I got my driving licence last November. Today, is the first time I used it.
My friend and I planned to drive to the new shopping centre. It is further than we usually go. We don't have a car, so my friend borrowed a car from her cousin.
We found the road by GPS on the phone. It said we would arrive in just 27 minutes, but I drove for almost two hours and still couldn't find it. We finally went back to the shopping centre we usually go to.
0 votedMarch 18, 20181 Phrases simple it's right?
I open the refrigerator.
I look inside the refrigerator.
I'm hungry.
I want something to eat.
I see a package.
It is a package of hot dogs.
There are six hot dogs in the package.
I take two hot dogs out of the package.
I close the refrigerator.
I put the hot dogs onto a platepacket instead of package
0 votedFebruary 20, 20170Shift change.
Hello.
I was working on the night shifts, but now, the company have changed me to the morning shifts. In my opinion, it is good for my health even though my wage will decrease.
Also, I`m in another factory, so it will mean I have other machines and processes to learn about.
I hope it will live up to my expectations.
See you later. or Speak to you soon or Bye.0 votedFebruary 20, 20172MY LIFE IN TORONTO (email)
Correction,please!!!!!
Dear Kaori
Hi, How are you? I'm good. I'll tell you about my life in Toronto.
It has been 2 weeks since I arrived.
I always go to school on weekdays and I have made friends with Koreans, Colombians, Brazilians and so on.
On weekends I go to the shopping centre and the market. There are many things in Canada that I've never seen in Japan. Everything is big in Canada. There are many differences between Canada and Japan.
First, I was spoken to by a Canadian. Surprisingly, she asked me the way to the station. She didn't know that I'm Japanese and I don't speak English!
I understood the reason why Canada is called the salad bowl of race.
Second, I thought in Canada it would be colder than in Japan. Surely, the temperature here would be lower than in Japan. But once you enter a room, it's so hot in there. It's not too cold to get up in the morning and take a bath.
I think that in winter living in Canada will be easier than living in Japan.
I have experienced culture shock but I think that it is interesting.
I'll send an email to you again. Bye
Chisa0 votedFebruary 20, 20171Description 2.
In this picture we can see a bedroom with two windows, two beds, and one desk.
On the left of the room there is one blue bed. On this bed there is a doll. Near the doll there is a clock. This clock is on the windowsill. In the top left corner of this picture, above the bed, there is a red balloon. Beside the blue bed there is a small bin. There is a blue bike and ball in front of the bin. There is also a green skateboard on the floor.
I need more expresions, as it is so boring to use all time near, near. Some one could pass me one link to describe correctly?I'll write a short bit about how I would describe this picture.
This picture is of a child's bedroom. There are two beds. On the left of the room the bed has a blue duvet and on the right of the room the bed has a pink duvet. In the middle of the room, against the wall there is a computer desk with a blue chair and desktop computer. On the floor there are various items such as scissors, a ruler, a pencil, a rubber (eraser), a pen, a fountain pen, colouring pencils, a paint brush and a school bag. In the room there is also a blue bike, a green skateboard, a blue ball and a scooter. On the bed with the pink duvet there is a baby's dummy and bottle.
There is more that could be described from the picture but it depends on how much detail you want to go into. Example: There is a pink pig on the shelf above the computer desk, or that one window is open.
0 votedFebruary 19, 20170Pagat Cave
Do you know where this place is? This place is called "Pagat Cave" and is in Guam. ( Click here for details of Guam → https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Guam) You have to go about 1.6 kilometers along the trail to get there. As there is no sunshine so it is dark in the cave. I am scheduled to visit here next month and I have to bring a flashlight. (A waterproof torch if I can) As far as I can see from the photo the water looks very clear and mysterious. But when I actually go there I think it will feel kind of creepy.0 votedFebruary 19, 20170
