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18th march 2018 text (2) Hello everyone! Please, could you correct my writing ? Thank you !

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Last November, I got my card of permission drive. Today, is my first time to use it.

I with my friend planed drive to the new shopping center, it is further than that we usually went. We don't have car, so my friend borrowed to her cousin.

We found the road to GPS in the phone, it said arrive just 27 minutes, but I drived almost two hours, still couldn't find it. Finally, we back to the shopping center we usually went.

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Hello everyone! Please, could you correct my writing ? Thank you !

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Last November I got my driving licence. Today is my first time using it.

My friend and I planned to drive to the new shopping center,  and it is further than that we usually go. We don't have a car, so my friend borrowed her cousin's car.

We found the road with the GPS in the phone, and it said we will arrive in just 27 minutes, but I drove almost two hours, and still couldn't find it. Finally, we back to the shopping center that we usually go.

Good writing and interesting story. Perhaps your address was incorrect for the new shopping center. It is a good experience having a drivers licence because it increases your destination choices.

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Hello everyone! Please, could you correct my writing ? Thank you !

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I got my driving licence last November. Today, is the first time I used it.

My friend and I planned to drive to the new shopping centre. It is further than we usually go. We don't have a car, so my friend borrowed a car from her cousin.

We found the road by GPS on the phone. It said we would arrive in just 27 minutes, but I drove for almost two hours and still couldn't find it. We finally went back to the shopping centre we usually go to.

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