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MY LIFE IN TORONTO (email) Correction,please!!!!! Dear Kaori Hi, How are you? I'm good.I'll tell you my life in toronto. It has been 2 weeks since I came here. I always go to the school on weekdays and I made friends with Korean, Colombian, Brazilian and so on. On weekend I went to a shopping center and a market. There are many things in Canada I've never seen in Japan.Anyway,everything is big in Canada. It has many different points between Canada and Japan. First, oneday, I was spoken to Canadian.Surprisingly,she asked me the way to the station. She didn't know that I'm Japanese and I don't speak English! I understood the reason why Canada is called salad bowl of race. Second, I thought in Canada is colder than in Japan.Surely, the temperature here is lower than that in Japan. But once you come in the room, It's so hot there.So It's nothing that It's too cold to get up in the morning and to take a bath. I think parhaps in winter living in Canada is easier than living in Japan. Thus I experienced culture shock but I think that is interesting. I'll send e-mail again to you. Bye Chisa

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MY LIFE IN TORONTO (email)

Correction,please!!!!!


Dear Kaori
Hi, How are you? I'm good.  I'll tell you about my life in Toronto.
It has been 2 weeks since I arrived.
I always go to school on weekdays and I have made friends with Koreans, Colombians, Brazilians and so on.
On weekends I go to the shopping centre and the market. There are many things in Canada that I've never seen in Japan.  Everything is big in Canada.  There are many differences between Canada and Japan.

First, I was spoken to by a Canadian.  Surprisingly, she asked me the way to the station. She didn't know that I'm Japanese and I don't speak English!
I understood the reason why Canada is called the salad bowl of race.

Second, I thought in Canada it would be colder than in Japan.  Surely, the temperature here would be lower than in Japan. But once you enter a room, it's so hot in there.  It's not  too cold to get up in the morning and take a bath.
I think that in winter living in Canada will be easier than living in Japan.
I have experienced culture shock but I think that it is interesting.

I'll send an email to you again. Bye
Chisa
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MY LIFE IN TORONTO (email)

Correction,please!!!!!


Dear Kaori
Hi, How are you? I'm good. Let me tell you a little about my life in Toronto.
I came here two weeks ago.
I go to the school on weekdays and I have made new friends from Korea, Colombia, Brazil and more.
This weekend I went to a shopping center and a market. There are many things in Canada I've never seen in Japan. Anyway, everything is big in Canada. It has many different points between Canada and Japan.

First, one day, I spoke to a Canadian. Surprisingly, she asked me the way to the station. She didn't know that I'm Japanese and I don't speak English!
I understood the reason why Canada is called salad bowl of race.

Second, I thought in Canada is colder than in Japan. Surely, the temperature here is lower than that in Japan. But once you enter a room, It's so hot in there.So It's not too cold to get up in the morning and to take a bath.
I think that during a winter living in Canada is easier than living in Japan.
Therefore I did experience some the cultural shock, but I think that it's interesting.

I will e-mail you again. Bye
Chisa

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