What version of line sound better? #1 When I'm with you It can be more Like being on you as at the war. #2 When I'm with you It looks like more Being on you as at the war. #3 When I'm with you It can be more Like ain't with you but at the war. #4 When I'm with you It could be more Like be on you as at the war.

Is this all right with lyrics? Do take a rest, try to hear all I want to say. I put up with your shit: but until today "Shut your mouth and be cool" it's just what I tell Well that's it, now I leave, you can go to hell Well, when I'm with you It can be more Like ain't with you but at the war. I've had enough. I'll wet my throat When I come home cause I got bored The war is done; the fire has died, With dust and ashes left behind. We quit the fight and maybe everything's all right To spite. Look, pain is pain, never mind that you called it wrong Pain is fear, love and pain never get along "Shut your mouth and be cool" it's just what I tell Well that's it, now I leave, you can go to hell

What you think about this lyrics? Could you help me to improve this one? #1 Please take a rest, listen to all I want to say. I put up with your whims: but until today. "Shut your mouth and be cool" it's just what I've spelt Well that's it, now I leave, you can go to hell Well, when I'm with you it's like a war and at the war seems like at you I've had enough I buy port wine, disarm my mines and feel so blue The fight is done; the fire has died, with dust and ashes left behind. We're all alive. And, maybe, everything's all right To spite. Look, pain is pain, never mind that you called it wrong Pain is fear, love and pain never get along "Shut your mouth and be cool" it's just what I've spelt Well that's it, now I leave, you can go to hell

My first work or jack-all-trades? That was regional tv-studio where I had been employed as a video editor but our boss wanted to build a web site for the company. I learned web design and Macromedia Flash by myself hence I began making this job. Project had been successfully done. Also I made video edition for the local news programm, made ad clips, worked as a system administrator at the same time. So then I have gotten my first web and motion design experience. By the way I also was practicing sound producing in my home studio and worked with Cubase Wave Lab and others sound editors while recorded local music bands. And more sometimes I used camcorder as video operator (actually when I was studying in University I worked part time job as a video operator).

Question with a tail in English, what is the tone? It's OK if I'm asking question about language, eh? 1) This question has the same tone of question, colour etc. as "Is it OK, if I'm asking question about language?" For me, it seems that Qs with a the tails have a litlle bit agressive colour (for instance when you feel agressive), am I wrong? 2) eh, huh and etc can replace any of "do I", "did I", "have I", "don't I" etc? Or it works only for the certain tenses? Thanky!