My family, my life

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I have a <font style="background-color: yellow;">happy </font>family <strike>happy </strike>with my parent <font style="background-color: yellow;">("parents" for both mother and father, or "father" if your father only)</font>, my young<font style="background-color: yellow;">er</font> sister, my young<font style="background-color: yellow;">er</font> brother and me. My father and my young<font style="background-color: yellow;">er</font> <font style="background-color: yellow;">brother<strike> is</strike></font> <font style="background-color: yellow;">live <strike>ing</strike></font> in <font style="background-color: yellow;">the</font> countryside. <strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">I and </font><font style="background-color: yellow;">m</font></strike> My young<font style="background-color: yellow;">er</font> sister <font style="background-color: yellow;">and I <strike>is</strike> live<strike> ing</strike></font> in the city for <font style="background-color: yellow;">our</font> new <font style="background-color: yellow;">jobs</font>.
<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>I</strike> On</font> the weekend, we <strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">are met</font></strike> all meet . We <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>will</strike></font> eat together and talk <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>for anything so we was made </strike><font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">about everything we did during the week</font></font>.
My job is hard, but when I think of my family, I <font color="#000000"><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"><strike>will try</strike> keep trying</font></font>.
<font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"><strike>w</strike>When</font> I was young,<font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"><strike> everyday,</strike></font> I didn't need to worry about anything because I had my parents<font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"> and</font> my family. But now, I have to <font color="#000000"><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">take care of <strike>worry</strike></font></font> myself.

Please, check my writing!

What is more important during the studies: grades or networking?

I think that networking is very important for a successful career in the future (I think you can delete "in the future" as it is implied here, but, leaving it in is not incorrect). It is hard to start from point zero and build good business relationships. If you have good friends in the business environment, they can help you out or recommend some people who can, which can help you. Either way, you will have an advantage over peers who do not have that help.  If you are good at networking, you can save you a lot of time and money in the future. People are the most valuable asset for your career.

(This is well-written and clear.  Other than the very first change (eliminating the "the" before "studies), my edits here are only suggestions, not corrections, as I found no actual mistakes in your writing. Very nicely done!)

The Belorussian legends. King-oak, stone sculptures of girls, and the holy stone crosses. Р2

If you want to get the experience unforgettable travel in Europe, you must visit Belarus. In the old forests of the south Belarus you can find a very strange things. There you can meet legends about of the King-oak, and veneration admire the stone sculptures of girls, and touch to the holy stone crosses. And all of these thing really exist now.

Are you intrigued? My friend and I and my friend were very intrigued. We are light on the feet enjoy traveling, therefore when we heard about these miracles, we went in search of them. It was two years ago.

In the evening night before we began our adventure day when we must go out, we searched all of the information which we can could find. But it was not easy. When we searched for information about the King-oak, we find found out for himself, what legendary King-oak many in Belarus! But which tree is the oldest from among them?

I and My friend Dima and I, my friend, decided to go in to the most remote place.  We had only two days, we didn't had have a car, a train didn't going to these places, on and buses took a very long time.  Therefore we choosed the to hitchhike ing. Hitchhiking is more quickly quicker than bicycling e, and, moreover, you can meet interesting people.

Solutions to Problems Caused by Urbanization

Countries and regions all over the world face the challenge of urbanization, with some problems occurring in big cities which makes (here the verb "to make" is conjugated to the plural "problems" so, "make" instead of "makes") the living quality decline. In my opinion, the causes come from different aspects and both governments and citizens should take action.

Two main causes of the bad quality ies ("quality of life" encompasses multiple problems, so you do not need to make quality plural) of life are traffic congestion and pollution in big cities. The bad traffic conditions usually results from the poor early planning and construction of roads. What's more, the great number of cars owned rship and the underdevelopment or lag in development of public transportation also contributes to this problem. The rapid deterioration of the environment is the another problem. Due to the increasing population of big cities, there is more sewage dumped into the rivers or sea, which causes water pollution. In addition, the waste gases released from vehicles and factories lead to air pollution.

The government should play the main role in trickling tackling those problems as and the masses public should cooperate with it. First of all, governments should focus on the development of public transportation, such as buses, metros and light railways. Another wise solution to traffic issues is to limit the private car ownership of cars. Furthermore, polluting factories should be moved from cities to barren areas in order to improve the environment. Individuals also need to raise awareness of citizenship responsibility (or, "the responsibilities of citizenship") and take actions such as recycling discarded s material, choosing public transportation, and so on.

Nowadays, the bad living quality in big cities mainly results from congestion and pollution. Governments and individuals should make joint efforts to improve it, especially the governments. former. (writing "former" here is technically correct, but it's unclear for sure what you're referring to because you have governments, individuals and efforts as nouns and so adding "governments" instead of "former" is more clear.)

canAre you be capable al of understanding your girl?

In the week before that time of the month, she feels she can eat a horse everyday and cannot help herself stop eating, even though she has felt feels full already,  LOL... In the meantime, she iscan easily to get upset with people...--colleagues...,friends...,relatives,...everyone...--she and will be really be in bad temper. But when her period is gone, you will see her smiling or laughing every all of the time, and the happy person gets will be back.