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What is more important during the studies: grades or networking?
I think that networking is very important for a successful career in the future. It is hard to start from point zero and build good business relationships. If you have good friends in the business environment, they can help you out or recommend some people, which can help you. If you are good at networking, you can save you a lot of time and money in the future. People are the most valuable asset for your career.
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Please, check my writing!
What is more important during the studies: grades or networking?I think that networking is very important for a successful career in the future (I think you can delete "in the future" as it is implied here, but, leaving it in is not incorrect). It is hard to start from point zero and build good business relationships. If you have good friends in the business environment, they can help you out or recommend some people who can, which can help you. Either way, you will have an advantage over peers who do not have that help. If you are good at networking, you can save you a lot of time and money in the future. People are the most valuable asset for your career.
(This is well-written and clear. Other than the very first change (eliminating the "the" before "studies), my edits here are only suggestions, not corrections, as I found no actual mistakes in your writing. Very nicely done!)
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