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Music I like listen music very much,and you?I think music can change one person's mood,the view of life,and his makings.I like Denglijun very much,at that time,she is a succsess singer.Then,who is your favorite singer?Please tell me ,I'm very happy to chat this topic.Come on.

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Music

I like very much to listen to music [very much], and you? I think music can change one a person's mood, the his view of life, and his feelings/responses makings. I like Denglijun very much; (at that time,) she is a succsessful singer. Then, Who is your favorite singer? Please tell me, I'm very happy to chat about this topic. Come on.

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Music

I like listen （like listening to）music （the music）very much,and you?I think music can change one person's mood,the view of life,and his makings. （you mean "his behaviors"?）I like Denglijun very much,at that time,she is （was）a succsess （successful）singer.Then,who is your favorite singer?Please tell me ,I'm very happy to chat （talk about）this topic.Come on. （???????）
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Music

I like to listen to music very much, and you?  I think music can change one a person's mood, the his (or her) view of life, and his makings personality.  I like Denglijun very much. at that time, She is a successful singer. Then,wWho is your favorite singer? Please tell me ,I'm very happy to chat about this topic. Come on.

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I mean her songs make me brave,I like her very much like you.
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Thank you for reply,I want to say Adele is so cute in my heart.

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