Please help me At the same time,the students from our school have been chosen into the Chinese national team ,participated International Space Settlement Design Competition,Adolescent Robotic competition,Model United Nations and made great success.The development of International education set up a higher platform for students' occupation planning as well as life development.At this time ,we are going to have a International and Chinese culture exchange event.There is no doubt that tonight is doomed to Be an unforgettable night.Lets wait and see,I declare the following:the concert starts now.Please allow me to introduce you to the guests.They are

Thanks for your help After taking our program in Cambridge University ,we might have to think about if you are going to study in America or England.Here are some informations and tips help you choose the Universities. As we all know,it’s so different to apply these two kinds of universities.They have their own biases.American Universities tend to enroll the students who have comprehensive abilities more than who only have academic scores.Compare to American ,English give the warm welcome to the students that are good at academic stuff.So there are many Chinese students was enrolled by Cambridge but was rejected by American Universities,and at the same time ,the hole amount of students is larger in Cambridge University .But that doesn’t mean the Universities in England is worse than the Universities in America.To some degree,some aspects is even better.Here are two significant advantages of learning in England. No.1 Top-Level Professors I’ m not saying the the professor who was printed on the poster,but the one who just sits with you and give classes to you.You know how important it is,how important to your academic development ,how important to your future career life ,how important his recommendation to you .Some research shows English Universities paid more on Professor system .and professors always spent more time on you. No.2 Efficient Offices Some offices just like Office of Career Services,Office of International Education,University Health services.They are always working for you ,they give you useful suggestions.With their help，you won’t be so confused .A authority newspaper said some offices in American Universities are not existing for helping students but that won’t happen in England.

The passage is little bit long ,hope you could help me make it better ,Thanks! After taking our program in Cambridge University ,we might have to think about if you are going to study in America or England.Here are some informations and tips help you choose the Universities. As we all know,it’s so different to apply these two kinds of universities.They have their own biases.American Universities tend to enroll the students who have comprehensive abilities more than who only have academic scores.Compare to American ,English give the warm welcome to the students that are good at academic stuff.So there are many Chinese students was enrolled by Cambridge but was rejected by American Universities,and at the same time ,the hole amount of students is larger in Cambridge University .But that doesn’t mean the Universities in England is worse than the Universities in America.To some degree,some aspects is even better.Here are two significant advantages of learning in England. No.1 Top-Level Professors I’ m not saying the the professor who was printed on the poster,but the one who just sits with you and give classes to you.You know how important it is,how important to your academic development ,how important to your future career life ,how important his recommendation to you .Some research shows English Universities paid more on Professor system .and professors always spent more time on you. No.2 Efficient Offices Some offices just like Office of Career Services,Office of International Education,University Health services.They are always working for you ,they give you useful suggestions.With their help，you won’t be so confused .A authority newspaper said some offices in American Universities are not existing for helping students but that won’t happen in England. And some tips about learning in Cambridge (I heard from some friends in Cambridge University): No.1:Food It is not cheap at all to eat in the restaurants in England .I have to mention a food market called “Tesco” because of cheap price and fresh fruits and vegetables .You can buy some necessities with a low price. No.2:Transportation We have two trip modes:trains and bus.Bus include national express and mega bus .The most convenient way is taking trains for us because if you ar e a student,you can have 70% off. No.3:Poundland（一磅店） There are lots of Poundland stores in England.You can buy some high quality goods with only one pound .You can find these shops anywhere with google map.

Could u help me to make this passag better ? As soon as we back to our city ,we chose our topic immediately after a short discussion.At first ,we wanted to choose “the best jobs in the world” but we heard that many groups have chosen this topic already .So we all agreed to change into “the worst job in the world “because we have a lot of interesting stories to share under this topic .The next step ,we started talking about some details about this topic .we didn’t want to introduce some works that other people have already introduced for many times .So we decided to say this four branches “the president ,the xxx,the xxx,the xxx”.Then I prepared what I am going to say by my own and we had the second discussion after preparing .We correct mistakes for others and give some advice .We shared our ideas and have sufficient practice .We worked together.From this process .I have learnt that it’s much easier to work with others .we did a efficient job together and at the same time ,we improved ourselves.

Experience Everyone has taken part in our ice breaking activities so I’m not going to have a lengthy introduction about how it goes,But some different thinking ways when they meet some new problem and how did they solve the problem .They were not going to start the task vexedly,they just got to know each other and trying to have a great acquaintances at first .For them they think it would be much more high-efficient when they know each other and finish the work easily and amusingly.And at the same time ,the leader of the group will appear and it is not difficult at all,just stand out and give a short introduction and even organize the conversation then you will become a leader imperceptible.But not enforce others to do something .Maybe that is not a typical foreigner way to solve the problem ,but that is educative.

how to change it to be native Everyone has taken part in our ice breaking activities so I’m not going to have a lengthy introduction about how it goes,But some different thinking ways when they meet some new problem and how did they solve the problem .They were not going to start the task vexedly,they just got to know each other and trying to have a great acquaintances at first .For them they think it would be much more high-efficient when they know each other and finish the work easily and amusingly.And at the same time ,the leader of the group will appear and it is not difficult at all,just stand out and give a short introduction and even organize the conversation then you will become a leader imperceptible.But not enforce others to do something .Maybe that is not a typical foreigner way to solve the problem ,but that is educative.

Do i have some grammar mistakes? Everyone has taken part in our ice breaking activities so I’m not going to introduce a lot about how activities run,But some different thinking ways when they meet some new problem and how did they solve the problem .They were not going to start the task vexedly,they just got to know each other and trying to have a great acquaintances at first .For them they think it would be much more high-efficient when they know each other and finish the work easily and amusingly.And at the same time ,the leader of the group will appear and it is not difficult at all,just stand out and give a short introduction and even organize the conversation then you will become a leader imperceptible.But not enforce others to do something .Maybe that is not a typical foreigner way to solve the problem ,but that is educative.