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After taking our program in Cambridge University ,we might have to think about if you are going to study in America or England.Here are some informations and tips help you choose the Universities.
As we all know,it’s so different to apply these two kinds of universities.They have their own biases.American Universities tend to enroll the students who have comprehensive abilities more than who only have academic scores.Compare to American ,English give the warm welcome to the students that are good at academic stuff.So there are many Chinese students was enrolled by Cambridge but was rejected by American Universities,and at the same time ,the hole amount of students is larger in Cambridge University .But that doesn’t mean the Universities in England is worse than the Universities in America.To some degree,some aspects is even better.Here are two significant advantages of learning in England.
No.1 Top-Level Professors
I’ m not saying the the professor who was printed on the poster,but the one who just sits with you and give classes to you.You know how important it is,how important to your academic development ,how important to your future career life ,how important his recommendation to you .Some research shows English Universities paid more on Professor system .and professors always spent more time on you.
No.2 Efficient Offices
Some offices just like Office of Career Services,Office of International Education,University Health services.They are always working for you ,they give you useful suggestions.With their help，you won’t be so confused .A authority newspaper said some offices in American Universities are not existing for helping students but that won’t happen in England.
And some tips about learning in Cambridge (I heard from some friends in Cambridge University):
No.1:Food
It is not cheap at all to eat in the restaurants in England .I have to mention a food market called “Tesco” because of cheap price and fresh fruits and vegetables .You can buy some necessities with a low price.
No.2:Transportation
We have two trip modes:trains and bus.Bus include national express and mega bus .The most convenient way is taking trains for us because if you ar e a student,you can have 70% off.
No.3:Poundland（一磅店）
There are lots of Poundland stores in England.You can buy some high quality goods with only one pound .You can find these shops anywhere with google map.
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The passage is little bit long ,hope you could help me make it better ,Thanks!
After finishing your degree program at Cambridge University, you might want to consider whether you should continue your further studies in England or the USA. Here are some information and tips help you make the choice .As we all know, applying for a place at a university in the US is quite different from England. They have their own criteria as to who is qualified. American Universities tend to prefer students who have more comprehensive skills than those who have only academic achievements .Compared to American universities , universities in England tend to welcome students who are strong academically. So, that is why there are many Chinese students studying at Cambridge who were earlier rejected by American Universities.
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and at the same time ,the hole amount of students is larger in Cambridge University .But that doesn’t mean the Universities in England is worse than the Universities in America.To some degree,some aspects is even better.Here are two significant advantages of learning in England.
No.1 Top-Level Professors
I’ m not saying the the professor who was printed on the poster,but the one who just sits with you and give classes to you.You know how important it is,how important to your academic development ,how important to your future career life ,how important his recommendation to you .Some research shows English Universities paid more on Professor system .and professors always spent more time on you.
No.2 Efficient Offices
Some offices just like Office of Career Services,Office of International Education,University Health services.They are always working for you ,they give you useful suggestions.With their help，you won’t be so confused .A authority newspaper said some offices in American Universities are not existing for helping students but that won’t happen in England.
And some tips about learning in Cambridge (I heard from some friends in Cambridge University):
No.1:Food
It is not cheap at all to eat in the restaurants in England .I have to mention a food market called “Tesco” because of cheap price and fresh fruits and vegetables .You can buy some necessities with a low price.
No.2:Transportation
We have two trip modes:trains and bus.Bus include national express and mega bus .The most convenient way is taking trains for us because if you ar e a student,you can have 70% off.
No.3:Poundland（一磅店）
There are lots of Poundland stores in England.You can buy some high quality goods with only one pound .You can find these shops anywhere with google map.
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After taking our program at Cambridge University, we might have to think about studying in America or England. Here are some pieces of information and tips to help you choose the Universities. As we all know, it’s so different to apply to these universities, since they have different standards. American Universities tend to enroll the students with comprehensive abilities more than those who only have high academic scores.
Unlike Americans, English give a warm welcome to students with good academic skills, so there are many Chinese students who were enrolled by Cambridge but were rejected by American Universities. And at the same time, the number of students is higher in Cambridge University, but that doesn’t mean that universities in England are worse than universities in America. To some degree, some aspects are even better. Here are two significant advantages of learning in England.
No.1 Top-Level Professors
I’ m not talking about the professors on posters, but the ones who teach the class. It is one of the keys toward a student's academic advancement, student's future career, and his/her resume. Some research shows English Universities values Professor system, and he/she will always spend more time with the student.
No.2 Efficient Offices
English Universities offers a wide range of offices that helps students and guide them such as the career services office, the international Education office, and heath services. With their help，you won’t be so confused. An authority newspaper said that some offices in American Universities do not exist for helping students, which is the opposite of England.
These are some tips about studying in Cambridge ( From friends who studied there)
No.1: Food
Eating in English restaurant can never be cheap; therefore, it is more convenient to shop in places like "Tesco". It is cheaper and has fresh food. It is possible to find other needs in low price.
No.2:Transportation
There are two ways of transportations: trains or buses. The bus offers national express and mega bus; however, traveling by train is more convenient for students thanks to student discounts that can reach 70% off.
No.3:Poundland（一磅店）
There are lots of Poundland stores in England.You can buy some high-quality goods with only one pound .You can find these shops anywhere with google map.
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