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Could u help me to make this passag better ? As soon as we back to our city ,we chose our topic immediately after a short discussion.At first ,we wanted to choose “the best jobs in the world” but we heard that many groups have chosen this topic already .So we all agreed to change into “the worst job in the world “because we have a lot of interesting stories to share under this topic .The next step ,we started talking about some details about this topic .we didn’t want to introduce some works that other people have already introduced for many times .So we decided to say this four branches “the president ,the xxx,the xxx,the xxx”.Then I prepared what I am going to say by my own and we had the second discussion after preparing .We correct mistakes for others and give some advice .We shared our ideas and have sufficient practice .We worked together.From this process .I have learnt that it’s much easier to work with others .we did a efficient job together and at the same time ,we improved ourselves.

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As soon as we got back to our city, we chose our topic immediately after a short discussion. At first ,we wanted to choose “the best jobs in the world” but we heard that many groups had chosen that topic already. So we all agreed to change to “the worst jobs in the world “because we had a lot of interesting stories to share about this topic. The next step was to begin talking in more detail about this topic. We didn’t want to introduce some works that other people had already introduced many times .So we decided to say this four branches “the president ,the xxx,the xxx,the xxx”.Then I prepared what I was going to say by my self and we had a second discussion after preparing. We corrected mistakes for others and gave some advice. We shared our ideas and had sufficient practice. We worked together. From this process I've learnt that it’s much easier to work with others. We did an efficient job together and at the same time, we improved ourselves.

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