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My incredible trip

Last week I went to Asturias for a few days.
I stayed in a spacious and comfortable residence, which was located in Oviedo.
The room was inexpensive,; we just paid paid just ["just paid" refers to the exact moment that you paid. "paid just" is the same as "paid only" and refers to the cost of the room] 50 € for four days.
The first day, we visited the Jurassic Museum, which was located in Colunga.
The Museum offered a guided tour of the several species of dinosaur in its galleries.
After that, we ate at a typical restaurant which served tasted tasty food.
We were pleasantly surprised by the cheapness low-cost [cheapness doesn't work; other options are: "low-cost" or "...by how cheap the bill was."] of the bill. In fact, we just paid one menu instead of paying two. [I don't understand what you are trying to say. Perhaps this: "In fact, we had to pay for only one meal, instead of two."]
In the afternoon, we went to the Ribadesella' s Port.
The next day we went up to the Covadonga's Lakes. There were animals in the middle of the road. The landscape was an amazing sight, so we profited ['profited' doesn't work here; perhaps you are thinking of 'take advantage'] to take lots of photographs. [try this: "...amazing sight, so we took advantage of the opportunity and took lots of photographs.]
When we went down to the montains we went to the Restaurant and we didn't stop eating until we were full.
Unfortunately, I felt sickness sick and I disguised regretted [I don't understand what you are trying to say] everything that I have had eaten.
My sickness soon passed and I felt better.
After lunch, we visited a friend, who lives in Llanes and we spent the afternoon with her.
On Saturday morning we walked for to Oviedo for a while despite of the bad weather
When the rain finished we went to Gijón and we were went strolling along the beach.
In the afternoon we went to Cudillero, it's a touristic touristy [touristic is correct, but it is a little out-dated. 'touristy' is a better word, but VERY informal] place, where people fishing fish during their working life work.
The next day I felt depressed because I didn't want to come back home. ["return home" sounds better than "come back home"

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Autumn

From my point of view, Autumn is the best season for taking pictures, especially the of nature because there are many different colours. Leaves of some trees change color and fall off. You can capture many eye-catching images. In On rainy days you can take good pictures too.

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What kind of people should receive the Nobel Peace Prize? (94 words)

The Nobel Peace Prize is a very important award that not everyone can win.

This prize should goes to the ones who are fighting for the rights of weak people the less fortunate ["weak people" are people who are not strong, not the best choice in this sentence] and the ones who stop wars and injustices in the world. I think there are many unknown people who deserve this prize, but it usually goes to persons people that are well known all around the world. [if you want to use the word "persons" the sentence would look like this: "...it usually goes to persons well known around the world" I would use the word 'people' since it is much more common]

But in the end, [no comma] the name of the award says it all: the Nobel Peace Prize should goes to the person who seeks the peace in for our disturbed world. [a better way to say this would be: "...person who seeks peace for our disturbed world" OR "...person seeking peace for our disturbed world."

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Running against darkness

When Marcos was eigthteen he began to participate in mountain races as a blind people guide guide for the blind OR guide for blind people. In a race where people move in complete darkness, the guide role is indispensable. He warns the runner when he finds a hole or a branch on the ground. He can also describe the landscape to make it possible for the runnenrs could to be aware of the things surrounding them ['the things surrounding them' is fine, but 'their surroundings' would sound much better]. Marcos started to lose his sight three years ago,. therefore now Now it is him who needs a guide. It was not easy for him.
Marcos was working as a taxi driver, but now he is not able to drive. He is trying to avoid that his disability sets limits to his life. [This doesn't make sense, but I know what you are trying to say. Perhaps you are trying to say: "He refuses to believe that being disabled will limit his life." OR "He isn't allowing himself to think negatively about his disability."]  He was world champion on in the 2012 Parasky Games. He is on in charge of the "Move for the people who can't" project, which has the aim of to make people to be aware of minority illnesses individuals with disabilties [the word 'minority' doesn't work here] and to encourage disable disabled people to practice sport play sports. On last May, he ran with some friends near nearly a thousands kilometers.

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Mate cocido: an addiction?

The last three weeks I have been preparing my exams at the university as ever as hard as ever. I guess all university students know how stressful is to study and to have the expectation to give to take a good exam and to pass it [i understand what you mean, but a better wording is: "to have the expectation to do well on an exam and pass it"] When I was studying hard every day, especially on my weekends, I could not avoid to feel help feeling a little nervous. But inspite of that; [not sure what you are trying to say here. 'in spite of' and 'despite' both wouldn't make sense here'] one day I had the desire to drink some thing hot. Because of i was in my house ["Because I was at home" sounds better]  there was only "matecocido" (maté) in that day so I said to myself : "well, why not? , it has passed been a long time since I have drank it ". Later on I was drinking that delicious beverage while I was reading my books.

The problem was that, while hours happened as time passed, I wanted to drink another one, and then another other... I remember in that day I had drunk drank 4 cups of maté! [this sentence would sound better without the 'I remember'] and the same thing happened on the others weekends when I studied was studying for my exams.

Now I could can say that I am finished with my exams, but ... I will put away the maté for my others exams of november November exams. [the meaning of this sentence doesn't make sense. perhaps this is better: "Now I can say that I am finished with my first exam, but I will put away the maté for the others." OR "Now that I have finished my November exams, I will put away the maté until next year."

**I hope my comments have been useful! Me gusta maté también. :)