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What kind of people should receive the Nobel Peace Prize? (94 words)

The Nobel Peace Prize is a very important award that not everyone can win.

This prize should goes to the ones who are fighting for the rights of weak people the less fortunate ["weak people" are people who are not strong, not the best choice in this sentence] and the ones who stop wars and injustices in the world. I think there are many unknown people who deserve this prize, but it usually goes to persons people that are well known all around the world. [if you want to use the word "persons" the sentence would look like this: "...it usually goes to persons well known around the world" I would use the word 'people' since it is much more common]

But in the end, [no comma] the name of the award says it all: the Nobel Peace Prize should goes to the person who seeks the peace in for our disturbed world. [a better way to say this would be: "...person who seeks peace for our disturbed world" OR "...person seeking peace for our disturbed world."

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