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My incredible trip Last week I went to Asturias for a few days. I stayed in a spacious and comfortable residence, which was located in Oviedo. The room was inexpensive, we just paid 50 € for four days. The first day, we visited the Jurassic Museum, which was located in Colunga. The Museum offered a guided tour of the several species of dinosaur in its galleries. After that, we ate at a tipical restaurant which served tasted food. We were pleasantly surprised by the cheapness of the bill. In face, we just paid one menu instead of paying two. In the afternoon, we went to the Ribadesella' s Port. The next day we went up to the Covadonga's Lakes. There were animals in the middle of the road. The landscape was an amazing sight, so we profited to take lots of photographs. When we went down to the montains we went to the Restaurant and we didn't stop eating until we were full. Unfortunately, I felt sickness and I disguised everything I have eaten. My sickness soon passed and felt better. After lunch, we visited a friend, who lives in Llanes and we spent the afternoon with her. On Saturday morning we walked for Oviedo for a while despite of bad weather When the rain finished we went to Gijón and we were strolling along the beach. In the afternoon we went to Cudillero, it's a touristic place, where people fishing during their working life. The next day I felt depressed because I didn't want to come back home.

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My incredible trip

Last week I went to Asturias for a few days.
I stayed in a spacious and comfortable residence, which was located in Oviedo.
The room was inexpensive,; we just paid paid just ["just paid" refers to the exact moment that you paid. "paid just" is the same as "paid only" and refers to the cost of the room] 50 € for four days.
The first day, we visited the Jurassic Museum, which was located in Colunga.
The Museum offered a guided tour of the several species of dinosaur in its galleries.
After that, we ate at a typical restaurant which served tasted tasty food.
We were pleasantly surprised by the cheapness low-cost [cheapness doesn't work; other options are: "low-cost" or "...by how cheap the bill was."] of the bill. In fact, we just paid one menu instead of paying two. [I don't understand what you are trying to say. Perhaps this: "In fact, we had to pay for only one meal, instead of two."]
In the afternoon, we went to the Ribadesella' s Port.
The next day we went up to the Covadonga's Lakes. There were animals in the middle of the road. The landscape was an amazing sight, so we profited ['profited' doesn't work here; perhaps you are thinking of 'take advantage'] to take lots of photographs. [try this: "...amazing sight, so we took advantage of the opportunity and took lots of photographs.]
When we went down to the montains we went to the Restaurant and we didn't stop eating until we were full.
Unfortunately, I felt sickness sick and I disguised regretted [I don't understand what you are trying to say] everything that I have had eaten.
My sickness soon passed and I felt better.
After lunch, we visited a friend, who lives in Llanes and we spent the afternoon with her.
On Saturday morning we walked for to Oviedo for a while despite of the bad weather
When the rain finished we went to Gijón and we were went strolling along the beach.
In the afternoon we went to Cudillero, it's a touristic touristy [touristic is correct, but it is a little out-dated. 'touristy' is a better word, but VERY informal] place, where people fishing fish during their working life work.
The next day I felt depressed because I didn't want to come back home. ["return home" sounds better than "come back home"

 

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