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House in the village
I do not have a lot of time to cook, especially delicacies. Usually, in the evening, I just slice up (or say "In the evening, I usually just slice up...") the tomatoes and cucumbers, pour them with olive oil and eat. When I was a kid, I loved that salat salad. My mother raised our own tomatoes and cucumbers, and salat salad from with them was delicious. You can't compare her vegetables with any other ones. I do not like vegetables in supermarkets; they are always too green, even during harvest seasons.
My parents have a house in the village and they do like farming. They have a pretty big plot of land for it. (or say "My parents have a house in the village with a pretty big plot of land where they like to farm.") Half of the plot is planted with potatoes, one fourth of the plot is planted with tomatoes, and the remained remaining part is for onion, garlic, cabbage, cucumber, melon, watermelon, pumpkin. There are also raspbery raspberry and strawbery strawberry clusters. There are , and apple, cherry and apricot trees; some of them were planted by my grandgrandfather great-grandfather.
The house is located in a picturesque place. It's surrounded with montains mountains with in the forest and a river flows near our border. It's really nice and peaceful place.------------------------------------------------------
This sounds like a wonderful place to be. Thank you for sharing. If you would like any additional help, just contact my teacher page. Good luck!
0 votedDecember 18, 20170Letter of complaint
Dear Sir
I am writing to draw your attention to the problem of the air conditioner in your hotel which, I believe, has been damaged by a thunderstorm this evening. Currently, the weather is very bad outside the hotel , so any activity this is possible. I suppose the air conditioner in your hotel does not work properly due to lack of service and not enough or engine power.
In my opinion, some extra precautionary measures have to be taken to overcome this unusual situation. I had to buy my own air conditioner device to ensure comfortable circumstances for my family.
Despite my engagement in efforts in improving this situation, some further actions are indispensable necessary to ensure satisfaction of your clients in this hotel. Firstly, I am entitled to compensation for expenses incurred as a result of the thunderstorm. Secondly, I also suggest you investigate the matter to ensure other people that this does not happen in the future to other people. Finally,I hope this situation will be resolved as soon as possible and I look forward to your answer without any delay. Thank you for your efforts.
Yours faithfully,
0 votedDecember 17, 20170Hello, Hasan! I really enjoyed your writing and agree with much of what you say. There are many things that help create a happy life. For me, it is perspective or how we see the world around us that creates much happiness or sadness. We need to find the beauty in humans, animals, nature, and the events that occur. Also, we need to find activities that make us feel significant, inside or outside of a job.
I think you are doing a good job in writing, Hasan, and I have made a few corrections below that may help you. There are other ways to make some of these corrections, but I chose these. If you find these tips helpful and would like more, just let me know or schedule a lesson with me. I have been an English teacher for years and I think I could help you out. However, if you choose not to, that is fine and I wish you great success.
Keep up the good effort!
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Can you check my little essay please and bring some comments :)
Some people say that in order to be happy, you must have a job you love doing. Others say that other factors are more important.Do you think that people can only help (be happy) if they have a job they really enjoy?
Most people spend eight hours or more every weekdays (plural form not appropriate here) by working. For this reason, doing what you love to do at work is important, but there are more important factors to be happy. To illustrate , even if someone has a job which he or she doesn't enjoy, (conditional statement needs comma) can be happy with being healthy and having good social life.
People consider their job as a necessity. That means people (who) work do not (do it) because they enjoy (it), but because they have to earn money to survive. Most of my friends have a job they do not like but they are happy because they have friends to enjoy spending their time with. For example, I have a friend whi (who) hate(s) his job but he loves his colleagues. He always spend(s) his time with them after work and he is enjoying his life.
In my opinion, healthiness is (the) most significant factor for happiness. I was not thinking that way before I worked with disabled children. I was always complaining about my life before I met them and their family. If you asked them how (could they) be happy, they definitely would (have) said that I (they) would be happy if I (they) had a normal child, or i (I) would able to do anything to change my (their) child to normal. So, (a) job is not the only factor to be happy.
Overall, even (if) the job you enjoy give(s) some satisfaction, there are far more important factors to be happy. I do not agree that you must have a job you love to be happy.
I wrote this essay down in 40 minutes without using dictionary.
What do you think guys, can you give me some tips?
0 votedDecember 17, 20170
