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Je suis vivant à Montréal. Je veux à pratiquer et améliorer mon français avec de nouvelles personnes. Je peux vous aider à apprendre l'anglais. Hope to speak soon!.
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    Hi! I'm Tomoya. I told you about my daily happenings Let me tell you about my day.  Today , I went to shinjuku with my friends in order to go shopping. I walked around the shinjuku station all day long. Therefore I'm tired... But I was glad to buy the cool shoes! Today's shopping has gone good well! In fact, my new shoes is are expensive for me. I think I spent money too much money... Little mistake :(

     

     

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    I crossed out the second sentence not because it was all wrong but because daily happenings is not a common way of saying such a thought.

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    June 28, 2015
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    Helping planet Earth

    Nowadays there are several options that we can do in order to contribute to reduce and gas emissions which affect the local environment and pass a healthy climate on our children.

    It is known that one of the best and most efficient way to help it is by recycling all the plastic bottles, tins and packages we do use in our daily live.  This is because these items are those which take a long time to be recycled and which affect not only to the scenery of our cities and villages but also pollute rivers and seas.

    Another issue which is concerning us is the bad use we do is our use of  cars instead of cycling or walking. Very often we use our cars to commute everyday , when we can could take our bicycle instead as long as our workplace is not far away from our home. Moreover, cycling or walking is a good way to keep us fit.

    To summarize, all of us we all have to put our grain of sand to improve the current situation of our cities in order to reduce the hard impact we are doing to our on environment. If we do our best, the planet will be grateful.

     

     

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    Good job. Other then the last part, which I highlighted everything makes sense.

     

     

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    June 27, 2015
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    I'm down G. I'll speak English with you. I need to practice my French.

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    June 26, 2015
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