Helping the planet Earth

Nowadays there are several options that we can do in order to contribute to reduce the gas emissions which affect the local environment and pass a healthy climate on to our children.

It is known that one of the best and most efficient ways to help it is by recycling all the plastic bottles, tins and packages we do use in our daily lives because these items are those which take a long time to be recycled and which affect not only to the scenery of our cities and villages but also polluting rivers and seas.

Another issue which concerns us is the bad use damage we do using cars instead of cycling or walking. Very often we use our cars to commute everyday when we can take our bicycle as long as our workplace is not far away from our home. Moreover, cycling or walking is a good way to keep us fit.

To summarize, all of us we have to put our grain of sand to improve the current situation of our cities in order to reduce the hard impact we are doing to our environment. If we do our best, the planet will be grateful.

Very well written Daniel. My corrections are in red and my suggestions to sound more natural are in blue/grey.

"all of us we have to put our grain of sand to improve..." is understandable but it's not a phrase I have heard in this context. In English you would probably be more likely to hear "all of us have to do our own small part to improve

Helping planet Earth

Nowadays there are several options that we can do in order to contribute to reduce and gas emissions which affect the local environment and pass a healthy climate on our children.

It is known that one of the best and most efficient way to help it is by recycling all the plastic bottles, tins and packages we do use in our daily live.  This is because these items are those which take a long time to be recycled and which affect not only to the scenery of our cities and villages but also pollute rivers and seas.

Another issue which is concerning us is the bad use we do is our use of  cars instead of cycling or walking. Very often we use our cars to commute everyday , when we can could take our bicycle instead as long as our workplace is not far away from our home. Moreover, cycling or walking is a good way to keep us fit.

To summarize, all of us we all have to put our grain of sand to improve the current situation of our cities in order to reduce the hard impact we are doing to our on environment. If we do our best, the planet will be grateful.

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Good job. Other then the last part, which I highlighted everything makes sense.