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Hello everybody!! Hello everybody!!! I'm Paloma. I'm Spanish. I was born in Madrid but I have been living in Valencia, a city at the Mediterranean coast, since I was a baby. I'm happily married with to my boyfriend from childhood , and we've got two teenagers sons. They sometimes are annoying, because they are teenagers ;). But they are so cute and are good boys. I've got a law degree. And I'm a civil servant after a competitive selection process for years. I like learning English a lot, and now, that my sons need me less, I have came come back to face-to-face English two classes a week. I like going to the gym, and doing body pump with Les Mills workouts. Other hobbie of mine includes Indian dance. I love it! I specially love classic Indian dance, like bharatanatyam, odissi and kathak, but Bollywood is so funny and charming. I am hoping to learn a lot more English with you. I love this photo because it was taken on an awesome trip to Budapest last summer, and it's a joke with the meaning of my name. Best regards and many kisses from Valencia.
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    El relativo encarcelamiento de los niños modernos

    Suena casi increíble, pero el 75% de los niños británicos pasan menos tiempo al aire libre que sus compatriotas encarcelados. Según una encuesta realizada por el gobierno británico, se atribuye esta estadística espeluznante a la falta de espacios verdes, por la amplia variedad de tecnología moderna disponible y por el miedo de los padres en el momento de dejar que sus hijos jueguen fuera de casa.

    Sin embargo, el tiempo pasado que se pasa al aire libre, según la Organización Mundial de la Salud, está reconocido como uno de los factores fundamentales en el desarrollo de los niños.

    Además de problemas físicos, como el sobrepeso y la obesidad, el pasar tanto tiempo en casa está aumentando vertiginosamente la incidencia de problemas de la salud mental, como depresión y ansiedad infantil. El tiempo de estar fuera El juego al aire libre también tiene una correlación significativa con el desarrollo social, dándoles a los niños oportunidades de jugar y socializar con sus amigos.

    En una sociedad en la que reina la tecnología, tenemos que encontrar nuevos formas para que los niños puedan experimentar la alegría de estar más tiempo al aire libre.


    GENIAL TU REDACCIÓN!!! muy, muy buen trabajo

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    May 29, 2017
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    A disappointed customer. Thank you mates for your corrections Dear Ricard Camarena, I am writing to express my disatisfaction with my dinner last Thursday, 11th May, in your restaurant Canalla Bistro. You are a high reputation cooker, being owner of three other restaurants of different categories, from a market bar to a four Michelin stars restaurant. Your brochure advertises a fresh style cooking, as the menu, which shows a fun and fusion recipes. My husband and I decided to celebrate our wedding anniversary with an special dinner in Canalla Bistro. But, our excitement was changing to a disgusting feeling, because this desired date was a complete disaster. First of all, despite we had a previous reservation, we were waiting long time for our table. The waiter was absolutely an unexpert professional. Not kind, not skilled, so clumsy. The titles of the dishes were overrated to the quality and preparation. The Pekin Duck style chicken wings were completely bland and raw. I wish I had delivered some from Domino's Pizza. The salad was soaked, the dessert was a sad coconut ice cream scoop, customized as a complicated dish, with a lot of cookie crumbs and caramel sirop. Given those circunstances, an economic compensation is not my principal concern. I hope a regret and an apology of you. I would like you to investigate this matter, and let me now your decision. I hope that I will not forced to take further mesures for my satisfaction. Your sincerely, Carmencita Titatita
    May 29, 2017
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    A cover letter (practising for my next B2) Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my interest in the position of Chef's assistant in response to your advertisement. I am currently working in Saona's Group as a prep cook. I am very comfortable on it, but I love extremely my profession , and I would be absolutely satisfied if I could be promoted. I graduated from Basque Culinary Center with a degree in Haute Cuisine, doing after that a master's degree in Molecular Cuisine. As you can see from my CV, I have worked in a few but highly valued restaurants, as Jamie Oliver's Original. I believe I would be the ideal candidate based on the fact that I am an enthusiastic and kind worker. And I usually get on well with my colleagues. Thank you for taking time to consider my application. I am available for contact . Please find CV attached, with my personal information. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Pepito Patatín
    May 29, 2017
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    Prons & cons:Should Students Have to Wear School Uniforms? Should Students Have to Wear School Uniforms? When you become to be a mother, a new wave of topics, subjects, doubts and situations arrive to your life. One of these questions is the social debate if students should have to wear school uniforms. This is an aethernal question, a perpetual confrontation between private schools and public shools, apparently. The followers of the positive option justify their proposal with many reasons given. For instance, when students wear the same clothes, there are not discrimination or differences because of their parents’ income. The school uniforms make the rise of a spirit of community, a feeling of belonging to a huge and solid group, that protects you. You are a person, but you are a part, an important piece of the school. You wears its symbol materialized on the uniform. However, the opponents believe, among other things, the use of school uniforms can destroy the personality of the students. They think that uniformity is a deterrant to the development of assesment of the pupils. This topic is an endless subject. Nobody are going to come an agreement.
    May 11, 2017
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    A complaint letter after a wedding party Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about the party that me and my husband hired with the Meliá Hotel located in Valencia and called ‘Queen Mary’ for celebrating our son’s wedding . I am sorry to say that I was extremely disappointed with the development of this social event, quite important for me and my family. First of all, as your brochure, as our signed contract, talked about ‘ top quality food’. When the meals became to arrive to guests, we were able to check that that assesment was absolutely false. Given that we made a test dinner for choosing and select the dishes, the quantity and quality of food that were leaving of the kitchen were completely different of we have tasted. The toasts were extremely dry, the smoked salmon was quite greasy, the shrimps smelled rotten, the steak was old and fibered, the garnish was short and the wedding cake tasted like a batter with butter as unique flavour. But not only that, the waiters weren’t professional people. They had rude and bad manners, bothering to all of us. I would like to investigate this matter and let me know your decision. We must insist in be compensated for this maddening situation. I hope that this matter can be resolve Yours faithfully, Anna Green
    May 10, 2017
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    https://www.capella.edu/blogs/cublog/phd-vs-doctorate-differences/



    If it can be useful, I'll be pleased of helping you

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    May 2, 2017
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    dele b2 expresión e interacción escrita

    La República Argentina ha desarrollado un programa para repatriar a científicos de todo el mundo. Usted es investigador en una universidad. Ahora, va a escribir un comentario para un foro de científicos de habla hispana. En el texto debe incluir y analizar la información que aparece en los siguientes gráficos:
    • comentar la distribución de los científicos repatriados por áreas de conocimiento;
    • hacer hipótesis sobre las repercusiones del programa para Argentina y para los países de origen;
    • destacar los datos que considere más relevantes;
    • expresar su opinión sobre la información recogida en el gráfico;
    • elaborar una conclusión.

    Número de palabras: entre 150 y 180.

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    Con el motivo de mejorar el desarrollo de la ciencia del país, la República Argentina ha lanzado un programa para repatriar a científicos de todo el mundo. Los dos gráficos muestran la distribución de los científicos por áreas de conocimiento y por países de origen.

    Según los datos, científicos del área de Ciencias de la Salud y Biológicas ocupan el primer lugar entre todas las áreas, representando un 37% del total, y en el segundo lugar se encuentra el de Ciencias Exacta y Naturales, con el porcentaje de un 31%.

    En cuanto a la distribución por países de origen, mientras un 44% del total de los científicos son( originarios o procedentes )de Europa, entre ellos, un 32% son de España, que es el país ocupando que ocupa el primer lugar. Este fenómeno puede deberse a que España tenía la mayoría de los emigrantes de Argentina, ya que en ambos los dos países se hablan el mismo idioma. (el sujeto es "idioma"=singular)

    Sin duda, este programa va a beneficiar el avance de la ciencia de Argentina, dado que los científicos pueden llevar conocimientos nuevos y tecnologías avanzadas al país.


    ENHORABUENA! Redactas infinitamente mejor que muchísimos españoles. Un saludo


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    May 1, 2017
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    I'm practising my FCE writing. Thanks a lot for its correction. Nice to write you again. I've been quite busy, because my mother has been operaten of her knee, and that fact has coincided with Eastern Holidays and the day of the Labour. And then, I hope having time for my close examination of B2(it is the equivalent degree to FCE). Present month of may, till first days of June, I must practise a lot of writing(cover letters, complain letters, essay and pros and cons) and I must pay attention to my son's final term exams.Not only that, the eldest is going to do the admission test for the University . What a nerve!
    May 1, 2017
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    Una queja en español

    Por lo general, soy una persona bastante sana, pero las dos semanas pasadas sufrí mucho por  dolor de la espalda. Mi amiga perdió su pendiente en la ducha del gimnasio y me cuando yo estaba agachada buscándolo,  sentí dolor en la espalda. Dos semanas después, aunque no es tan doloroso ya no me duele tanto como cuando me lo hice, todavía me cuesta levantarme de un asiento y me lleva unos minutos hasta que puedo poner la espalda recta. (No sé si esta frase tiene sentido . SI LO TIENE ) También he tenido muchos problemas con internet. Mi portátil está estropeado. No funcionaba la  había una connexion conexión de internet, aunque sí pude conectarme había conexión con el iphone y el ipad. Intenté arreglar mi portátil y hice algo mal (no soy técnica) y perdí el sistema operativo. Afortunadamente, el portátil es bastante viejo y yo había tenido algunos problemas con el hardware, por ejemplo, el sonido tenía una conexión suelta, no podía usar mis cascos. Bueno compré una  un Macbook Air (en español de España se utiliza el masculino, para el ordenador)pensando que todo se resolvería,pero no fue el caso. Pero internet me seguía sin funcionar  Todavía no había conexión de internet. Tuve que llamar el al servicio de clientes de Apple Mac. La persona con quien hablé era muy servicial y juntos hicimos algunas pruebas con el Mac. Después de hacer muchas pruebas me contó que no era la culpa del Mac sino un problema con el Wifi, aunque todos los otros dispositivos funcionaban bien. Como prueba, me le pidió a mi hijo que lo  le pedí a mi hijo que se llevara el Mac y lo probara  probarlo con su la Wifi de su casa en su piso y todo funcionó bien. Al  día siguiente El siguiente día compré nueva un nuevo outer y ahora todo va bien!!!!

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    December 1, 2015
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    Hello everybody!! Hello everybody!!! I'm Paloma. I'm Spanish. I was born in Madrid but I was living in Valencia, a city at the mediterranean coast, from I was a baby. I'm happily married with my boyfriend of youth, and we've two teenagers sons. They sometimes are annoying, because they are teenagers ;). But they are so cute and good boys. I'v got a law degree. And I'm a civil servant after a public competition for years. I like learn English a lot, and now, that my sons need me less, I have came back to school twice a week. I like going to the gym, and doing body pump with Les Mills workouts. Other hobbie of mine is dancing Indian dance. I love it! I love specially classic Indian dance, like bharatanatyam, odissi and kathak, but bollywood is so funny and charming. I am hoping to learn a lot Englis with you. I love this photo because it was taken in an awesonme trip to Budapest last summer. Best regards and kisses a lot from Valencia.
    November 28, 2015
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